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大家好.現在由我來介紹關於日本的shopping.由於日本太過廣大.所以我今天只介紹日本首都『東京』的shopping。

Hello, everybody. I am your host of “shopping” in Japan now.

As Japan is amplitude, today, I will introduce shopping in Tokyo only.

首先到了日本一定會看到琳瑯滿目的藥妝店(Matsumotokiyoshi)尤其在東京街頭更是不勝枚舉。

First of all, you can see plenty Drugs and Cosmetic stores around, especially the Matsumotokiyoshi, it is everywhere.

︰尤其以東京的渋谷.竹下通.上野都有設置分店的【MATSUKIYO】最為聞名。而這3間分店又以上野店的部份商品定價最便宜.另外渋谷店則是商品種類最多且營業時間最長。

Above all the cosmetic shops, the Matsukiyo is the most popular one, it has shops around涉谷、竹下通、上野 in Tokyo, and the three shops in those areas have the best price. And the price at 上野 is the cheapest of all. But the shop at 渋谷 provides the most variety stocks and opened for the longest hours.

Where to buy(為何要用where to buy呢) : Above all 涉谷、竹下通、上野 in Tokyo have branch stores.

The cheapest price is in 上野。

In涉谷,the store divers article and opening time is long.

how to buy:【門口比標價.進門比獨家】是去逛藥妝店的不二法則。

Shop around before and after you entering the cosmetic shop is the only principle for when going shopping for cosmetics.

通常門口擺的產品都是當下日本最紅的廣告商品.各家一定都比低價;

The hottest advertised products are usually placed in the casket in front of the shops, each shop will try to compete with the lowest price.

而進門則是要找【獨家販售】的新商品.

After you enter the shop, you look for the latest exclusive stock

日本人最愛【某某店限定色】或【某某店限定香味】的行銷手法.這點一定要注意。

“such stock is sold in such shop only” or “You find specific fragrance in such shop only” is the most accepted and loved selling technique. You must be cautious with this.

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    大家好.現在由我來介紹關於日本的shopping.由於日本太過廣大.所以我今天只介紹日本首都『東京』的shopping。Hi, everybody. Now let me tell you things about "Shopping in Japan". Since Japan is too wide to cover, I will only introduce "Shopping in Tokyo" to you today.首先到了日本一定會看到琳瑯滿目的藥妝店(Matsumotokiyoshi)尤其在東京街頭更是不勝枚舉。First of all, on arrival in Japan you definitely will find many "Matsumotokiyoshi" chain drug stores which are full of countless dazzling stuff inside. Especially in Tokyo, it's like omnipresent wherever you go. ︰尤其以東京的渋谷.竹下通.上野都有設置分店的【MATSUKIYO】最為聞名。而這3間分店又以上野店的部份商品定價最便宜.另外渋谷店則是商品種類最多且營業時間最長。Among them the most famous are 【MATSUKIYO's】(short for "Matsumotokiyoshi Drug Store") in Shibuya, Takeshitadouri and Ueno in Tokyo. Among these three, the pricing is likely the lowest in Ueno store. However, the Shibuya store has widest variety of merchandise and longest store hours.【門口比標價.進門比獨家】是去逛藥妝店的不二法則。"Look for listed prices at the entrance, and look for exlusives past the entrance" is the only policy of shopping in these stores. 通常門口擺的產品都是當下日本最紅的廣告商品.各家一定都比低價;Usually those hottest advertised products are showcaseded at the entrance of the store, and every store will definitely try to entice as many customers as possible with the lowest competitive prices. These are what you need to look for at the entrance. 而進門則是要找【獨家販售】的新商品.Once you go past the entrance and enter the store, you will like to look for the latest exclusive merchandises. 日本人最愛【某某店限定色】或【某某店限定香味】的行銷手法.這點一定要注意。Such promotions as "XXX store only" or “Exclusive fragrance for XXX store” is the most polular and undertaken selling technique or strategy for Japanese. You must be aware of this.

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