Hanna 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

請幫我看一下我的英文寫的對不對

由於家濟的因素,在學期間利用課餘時間參加了學校的工讀及麥當勞、餐廳、文教機構等地方打工,也曾擔任過家教工作。從工作的失敗與打擊中磨練出積極、正向的態度,讓我在工作領域當中成長許多,也因此促使我不斷學習;在即將進入職場的現在,我相信無論是那一種工作,最重要的還是自己本身,也因此我已是滿懷期待地準備迎接各種的挑戰了。

在國泰工作時讓我更進一步的瞭解壽險顧問不僅要有全面性保險商品知識,也要涉獵財務知識及更要培養財務專業的能力,成為全方位的理財規劃師;在參與壽險顧問的過程中,要如何做到讓客戶肯定你的專業,建立信任;提供埶誠、完善的服務,客戶願意協助介紹,創造源源不絕的客源,才是工作上最大的挑戰。因此不斷訓練自己專業的能力,我也確實從中獲得許多。我在工作中發揮所長同時也了解自己的不足,對於不足的缺憾也透過學習來充實自我,希望在今後的工作中,能有所幫助。我希望未來在工作中能學有專才,因此萌生轉職的意願。我有信心勇於接受挑戰,而我本身即非常嚮往工作內容,而且希望能在的職務上有一展長才的機會。

Outside as a result of the home economics factor, used in the semester attends class the time to participate in the school labor to read and place and so on McDonald's, dining room, culture and education organization works, also once has held the post of the family education work.Disciplines positively from in the work defeat and the attack, to the manner, lets me grow in the middle of the work domain many, also therefore urges me unceasingly to study; Soon is entering duty field present, I believed regardless of is that one kind of work, is most important or own itself, also therefore I already was fill with the anticipation to prepare to meet each kind of challenge.

When Cathay Life Insurance Co., Ltd work lets I more further understanding life insurance consultant not only have to have the comprehensive safe commodity knowledge, also must browse the financial knowledge and must raise the financial specialized ability, becomes omni-directionally manages finances plans the teacher; In in the participation life insurance consultant's process, how has to achieve lets the customer affirm your specialty, establishes the trust; Sincerely provides, the perfect service, the customer is willing to assist to introduce that, creates the more and more sources of tourists, is works the biggest challenge.Therefore unceasingly trains the oneself specialized ability, I also truly obtain many.

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I display manager during the work also to understand own insufficiency, also penetrate regarding the insufficient disappointment studies enriches oneself, hoped in the next work, will be able to have the help.

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  • 1 0 年前
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    我只能說 真的花了我不少時間翻譯 因為 感覺比較沒有一個段落點

    有很多你中文的部分 我把他簡化了 感覺會比較順

    希望有幫助到你

    但是 我翻到後來 真的有點翻不下去 因為 一句話太長 沒有段落點

    就....... ㄟ.... 你參考吧....

    Due to money matters of my family, I have been taking some part time jobs in restaurants, education organizations and McDonalds during my education.

    I have been learning from the failure and frustration and it leads me to aggressive and positive attitude.

    In the meantime, I am looking forward to work and take any kind of challenge in any field as I believe I will do well.

    When I worked for Cathay Life Insurance Co., Ltd, I understand that you need to know more than the product knowledge as an insurance consultant. For example, you have to spend some time to look for information about finance and gain more professional ability on finance in order to become an excellent financial planner.

    The biggest challenge during my work in Cathay is to build the trust between the customer and me and made them to have confidence in me. It is also difficult for customers to refer you as an insurance consultant to their friends or relatives. Therefore, I am always doing my best to improve myself and I obtain a lot indeed.

    I have made a great use of what I am good with and I have also found out what my shortcoming is. For the shortcoming, I tried to improve myself from studying and hope it will help in the future.

    I hope I could work for something which is related to my major and that is why I would like to look for a new job. I am happy to take challenges and I am also looking forward to take the opportunity to work in your company.

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  • 1 0 年前

    恩, 沒錯, 看起來是一偏好文章,可是,文法用詞非常不當,真不知如何幫你做修改, 如果是翻譯機,可原諒。。。中文的寫的很棒, 但是,翻成英文ㄉ話, 是沒人看的的

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  • TEKA
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    1 0 年前

    慘不忍睹ㄟ

    除了單字 其他文法 字ㄉ順序 一踏糊塗

    這樣說 真ㄉ很抱歉 不過 是肺腑之言

    一定是用翻譯機

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