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英文的句子,幫我檢查

幫我檢查一下

文法或是拼字等等有沒有錯

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1.Nick does not want to at the mercy of his mom anymore.

2.He has a short fuse that his girl friend can't stand him anymore.

3.Leo relys on the medicion(藥) to stay alive.

4.When you're sick ,it is necessary to see a doctor.

5.This class got a narrow victory in this race.

6.We study at school for more knowledge and the diploma.

7.Efficient is more and more important for morden people now.

8.Good students usually get a high result in the end of the stern.

9.We need some advice from the instructor,maybe he can instruct us .

10.He is so nice that we allappreciate him.

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  • 1 0 年前
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    英文的句子,幫我檢查1.Nick does not want to at the mercy of his mom anymore.改為 Nick does not want to show mercy to his mom anymore.尼克不想再對他媽媽表示寬容了2.He has a short fuse that his girl friend can't stand him anymore.改為 His girl friend can't stand him anymore becuase he lits the fuse.他女友並不想再容忍他了, 因為他點燃了導火線 3.Leo relys on the medicion(藥) to stay alive.改為 medicine (藥物)4.When you're sick ,it is necessary to see a doctor.正確 !5.This class got a narrow victory in this race.got -> 改成 won6.We study at school for more knowledge and the diploma.改為 We go to school for more knowledge and degree.study at school 是在學校唸書, 但不一定是上學go to school 才是上學另外, 學歷是degree, diploma是畢業文憑7.Efficient is more and more important for morden people now.改為 Efficiency (效率 - 名詞)8.Good students usually get a high result in the end of the stern.Good students usually get pefect outcomes in the end of stern competition.perfect outcomes - 完美的結果stern competition - 嚴苛的競賽9.We need some advice from the instructor, maybe he can instruct us.改成 We need some advice from the instructor who can instruct us.10.He is so nice that we allappreciate him.改成 He is so nice and we all appreciate him.加油了, 要用功學習英文哦 ^ ^小粉/PinKy @ L.A ♡

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  • 1 0 年前

    1.Nick does not want to at the mercy of his mom anymore.

    -->Nick does not want to be at the mercy of his mom anymore.

    Nick不想再任由他媽擺佈了。

    at the mercy of 是介係詞片語,再不定詞to之後,應該加上be才合文法。

    2.He has a short fuse that his girl friend can't stand him anymore.

    -->He has such a short fuse that his girl friend can't stand him anymore.

    他如此容易發脾氣,以致於他女友再也無法忍受了。

    ...such+名詞詞組+that S+V 如此...以致於...

    3.Leo relys on the medicion(藥) to stay alive.

    -->Leo relys on the medicine to stay alive.

    medicion 拼錯字了

    4.When you're sick, it is necessary to see a doctor.

    -->correct,但是逗號後面要空格。

    5.This class got a narrow victory in this race.

    -->correct

    gain/win/have/get a victory 都是可以的

    6.We study at school for more knowledge and the diploma.

    -->OK.

    7.Efficient is more and more important for morden people now.

    -->Efficiency is more and more important for modern people now.

    應該用名詞efficiency當主詞,不可用形容詞、morden拼錯字了。

    8.Good students usually get a high result in the end of the stern.

    -->Good students usually get a great (test) result in the end of keen competition.

    我在猜您是要講好學生在激烈的競爭的結局中通常考試成績(結果)會很好,所以最好改如上。因result(結果)沒有高低、(成績)grade才有。激烈競爭也可以用intense competition。stern 是指嚴厲。但是若您的意思是老師嚴厲的結果,那就如下:

    Good students usually perform a lot better (academically) with teachers' stern dispiline (或用treatment也行)

    9.We need some advice from the instructor, maybe he can instruct us.

    -->We need some advice from the instuctor. Hopefully he can instruct us.

    不知您要表達的意思為何?是不是:我們需要這位指導者的一些建議。希望他能指導我們。如果是,hopefully比較好。使用maybe會讓語意出現問題。

    10.He is so nice that we allappreciate him.

    -->He is so nice and we all appreciate him.

    大概忘記打空格了。句子是正確的。

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