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請幫我看一下我的英文寫的對不對

很榮幸能在這裡介紹自己,在校主修電腦資訊系統(VB、JAVA、CCNA、LINUX等)及商業管理(行銷、財務、生產與作業、人力資源等),並在專攻的領域奠下良好而紮實的基礎,也曾擔任過班上的總務及衛生幹部。由於希望增加不同的處事能力,參加了許多的社團(童軍、網球等)及“財團法人犯罪被害人保護協會“舉辦的社區生活營的教導志工,藉此能跟我不一樣的人共事及學習他們不同工作經驗,也能幫助我保持心胸開闊,並讓我學會尊重不同的人和想法。當然,不同得意見常常會引起爭論,但我真的覺得這是好事;處理每個人的不同想法和意見,這意的過程能導向更棒的成果。

由於家濟的因素,在學期間利用課餘時間參加了學校的工讀及麥當勞、餐廳、文教機構等地方打工,也曾擔任過家教工作。從工作的失敗與打擊中磨練出積極、正向的態度,讓我在工作領域當中成長許多,也因此促使我不斷學習;在即將進入職場的現在,我相信無論是那一種工作,最重要的還是自己本身,也因此我已是滿懷期待地準備迎接各種的挑戰了。

在國泰工作時讓我更進一步的瞭解壽險顧問不僅要有全面性保險商品知識,也要涉獵財務知識及更要培養財務專業的能力,成為全方位的理財規劃師;在參與壽險顧問的過程中,要如何做到讓客戶肯定你的專業,建立信任;提供埶誠、完善的服務,客戶願意協助介紹,創造源源不絕的客源,才是工作上最大的挑戰。因此不斷訓練自己專業的能力,我也確實從中獲得許多。我在工作中發揮所長同時也了解自己的不足,對於不足的缺憾也透過學習來充實自我,希望在今後的工作中,能有所幫助。我希望未來在工作中能學有專才,因此萌生轉職的意願。我有信心勇於接受挑戰,而我本身即非常嚮往工作內容,而且希望能在的職務上有一展長才的機會。

我認為在貴公司工作,能給我一個的機會來應用我大學所學到的東西,雖然我沒有任何這方面的工作經驗,在未來裡我會努力學習及培訓自已所缺乏的技能。

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    我是英文老師

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    Very honoured to introduce oneself here, major in the information system of the computer (VB, JAVA, CCNA, LINUX,etc. at school And commercial management (marketing, financial affairs, production and homework, human resources,etc.) ,And the field of specializing in establishes the good and sturdy foundation, has served as the general affairs in the class and hygiene cadre. Because hope to increase different ability of handling affairs, join a lot of corporations (Tong Jun, tennis,etc.) And the instruction will engineering of community life camp held that " the crime injured party, legal person of financial group, protects the association ", the person that can be like me by this works together and studies their different working experience, can help me to keep broad-minded too, let me learn to respect different person and idea. Certainly, so different that the suggestion will often be controversial, but I really think this is a good thing; Deal with everybody's different ideas and suggestion, can lead more excellent achievement in course of this purpose. Because of the factor which the family helps, utilize the time after school to participate in such localities as probational and McDonald, restaurant, culture and education organization of the school,etc. to work as a temporary labourer during studying, have taken on the family education work too. Failure on since work and not in blow temper not appearing positive, not to attitude, let me grow up a lot of among working field, impel me to study constantly too; Will enter now on the job market soon, I believe no matter that kind of job, the most important one is still oneself, I have planned to meet the

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