酷酷糬麻 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

可以幫我修改英文文法嗎..拜託拜託~~

My most unforgettable thing is a 17-year-old birthday, for giving I surprised and pleased, the classmate takes advantage of I don't notice use the coat to the cake to cover up to put at me of chair up, good nearly, I didn't sit down go to otherwise I of the bottom may will be a cake.

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謝謝你囉^^我會加油的ˊˋ

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  • 匿名使用者
    1 0 年前
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    我幫你修改好了...你英文真的要加油喔

    One of my most unforgettable experience is that on my 17-yearr-old birthday, my classmates wanted to give me a surprise so they put a cake on a chair and then covered the cake with a coat, thinking that I'd sit down on it. Thank god (It was a good thing) that I didn't sit down on it or else my jacket and my butt will be all covered up with the cake.

    參考資料: 我是美國出生的中國人(台灣省)
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  • 1 0 年前

    One of my most unforgettable experience was on my 17-year-old birthday. My classmates wanted to give me a surprise, so they put a cake on a chair and covered the cake with a coat, thinking that I'd sit down on it.

    2006-11-12 01:22:16 補充:

    I thanked god for that I didn't sit down on it or my jacket and my butt would had been all covered up with the cake.

    2006-11-12 01:23:16 補充:

    all改both

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