[急] 請協助檢視這樣的英文求職信內容是否可行?

各位大大, 請幫我看一下以下求職信內容是否流暢?文法是否正確? 再請提供一些小意見, 謝謝!!! Dear XXX, RE: Application for the position of Sales Assistant In response to your advertisement for this position in 104 website, I have enclosed my resume for your consideration. As a customer service officer at XXX during the past six years, I was responsible... 顯示更多 各位大大, 請幫我看一下以下求職信內容是否流暢?文法是否正確? 再請提供一些小意見, 謝謝!!!

Dear XXX,

RE: Application for the position of Sales Assistant

In response to your advertisement for this position in 104 website, I have enclosed my resume for your consideration.
As a customer service officer at XXX during the past six years, I was responsible for over 250 customers' management, including communication and coordination, and administrative functions. My duties included booking audited schedule, quoting for assessment, and invoice…etc. All these abilities are important to the smooth running of the office.
I believe my qualifications match your requirements and would appreciate the opportunity to discuss this application with you at your convenience.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours sincerely
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