請幫我檢查這些英文句子的文法

1.There are abundant animals and plant kind.

2.Playing leantern riddle games give amusement.

3.The beehive rockets in Yanshuei.

4.In Pingsi fly bless lantern.

5.There are six national parks in Taiwan and they all boast wonderful world-class

scenery and unique ecologies.

6. In east view and admire Dolphin.

7.Hot spring of diversiform in Taiwan.

8.Releasing of water lanterns into the sea

9.The burning of spirit money for ghost

10.The child will carry the lantern.

11.People eat a sweet rice dumpling.

12.At the top are offerings to the ghost, a flag and a gold medal

13.Offering of food, drink, ritual dances and music

14.The people jump Zhong Kui expel evil

15Ali mountain have grand the sun rises.

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    請幫我檢查這些英文句子的文法怪怪 .. 妳寫的句子有些沒有主詞或動詞說 ..狠難猜懂你所要表達的意思 > <1. There are abundant animals and plant kind.There are tremendous kinds of animals and plats.abundant/significant/tremendous 都有大量'足夠'豐裕的的意思種類kinds須要移到前面2. Playing leantern riddle games give amusement.Playing leantern riddle game is full of amusement.game使用單數即可give建議改為 is full of amusement - 充滿了樂趣3. The beehive rockets in Yanshuei.建議 -> The beehive rockets build Yanshuei as a firework kingdom.蜂炮把鹽水打造成一個煙火王國4. In Pingsi fly bless lantern.建議 -> In Peingsi, people fly bless lanterns in order to prey for peace.為了祈求平靜, 人們在平溪釋放天燈.in order to - 為了什麼目的5. There are six national parks in Taiwan and they all boast wonderful world-class scenery and unique ecologies.建議 -> they all boast 改為each one boasts its various wonderful world-class scenery and unique ecology.6. In east view and admire Dolphin.east view -> 應該改為 eastern views 東方的觀點7. Hot spring of diversiform in Taiwan.各式各式的溫泉 -> Diversiform/Diverse hot springs8. Releasing of water lanterns into the sea.把of去掉, releasing就可以了9. The burning of spirit money for ghost.紙錢 其實用cash就可以了spirit 另外又有酒精的意思, 容易搞混Cash-burning for the ghost. 10. The child will carry the lantern.這句沒有錯誤11. People eat a sweet rice dumpling.這句沒有錯誤12. At the top are offerings to the ghost, a flag and a gold medal.這一句我看不懂前面的意思, 是在什麼上面呢?offerings 改為gifts 比較虔誠13. Offering of food, drink, ritual dances and musicofferings 改為gifts 比較虔誠14.The people jump Zhong Kui expel evilPeople dance like Zhong Hui to expel evils.人們像鍾馗一樣的跳舞為了要驅邪15. Ali mountain have grand the sun rises. Ali monutain has marvelous sunrise.阿里山有著令人驚嘆的日出景象呼呼 .. 終於幫妳修改完了小粉/PinKy @ L.A ♡

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