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Hay_Song Yan Ro Lu黑松羊肉爐

There is a famous lamb hot pot store located

In chanpping village named hay_song yan ro lu

You can go straight down the road about 3 minutes drive

then you will See it easely

How about ordering a lamb hot pot

Everyone says it is delicious

After you order it you will see so many barons and muttonchops

Inside of your pot

It has more then 8 barons Inside of your pot

And it is all juiceful of every part!!

Each pot cost you 250 dollars

And if you still want more

you should add anther 100 dollars

to each one bowl of barons

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    There is a famous lamb hot pot store located in the chanpping village named hay_song yan ro lu.

    You can drive straight down the road for 3 minutes, and then you will see it easily.

    How about ordering a lamb hot pot?

    Everyone says it is delicious, and you can get lots of baron and muttonchop in the pot.

    It has more then 8 pieces of baron in each pot they sell, and they all taste juicy!!

    Each pot costs you 250 dollars.

    If you still want more, you can even add additional 100 dollars to get another bowl of baron.

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