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There has a mysterious Santa in the America.Over vhe past 26 years,he get the street send the note who need help for him.Who is the kindhearted Santa?He is Larry steward.

In December of 1979,this is twice year in Christmas Eve that he lost his job.He feel eveything is worng.When he saw the boss in the buffet car,but the boss must to be work.He suddenly feel he is lucky man.

Steward puts forward 200 U.S. dollars form the deposit of his account on same day.He get the street send the note who need help for him.He say,"This is his christmas gift for him.By our reckoning he sand the money in over 1300000 U.S. dollar.

Now he had cancer and accept the chemotherapy.He hope the conviction can communicate.

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(當他看到餐車內的老板娘,雖然一臉愁苦,但還是必須工作)

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(他希望這種事情能延續下去)

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    There is a mysterious Santa in the America. Over the past 26 years, he went out on the streets and handed out money to people in need. Who is the kind hearted Santa? He is Larry Steward.

    In December of 1979, this was the second time that he lost his job before Christmas Eve. He felt everything was wrong. (When he saw the boss in the buffet car, but the boss must to be work.) He suddenly felt that he was a lucky man.

    Steward withdraw 200 dollars form his account on that same day. He got on the streets and gave the note to those needing helps. He said,” This is my Christmas gift for him”. By our reckoning he spends 1,300,000 U.S. dollar over the years.

    Now he has cancer and accepts the chemotherapy. (He hopes the conviction can communicate.)

    括弧內的兩句沒有改,

    因為看不懂要表達的意思,

    可以再補充一下嗎?

    2006-11-29 09:04:18 補充:

    (當他看到餐車內的老板娘,雖然一臉愁苦,但還是必須工作)When he saw the the sad faced street vendor was still working on Christmas Eve, he suddently felt he was a lucky man.(他希望這種事情能延續下去)he hopes this kind of good deed would continue.前一句順便改一下Now he has cancer and receives the chemotherapy treatment.

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