恰恰 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

誰可以幫我改英文作文..要合文法..不能是直接中翻英><

Hello, everyone, today I'm going to talk about my favorite kind of music. To live eighteen years, keep company with music everyday. To my life, it cannot be separated from the relations in mine life. Music makes me pleasure everyday. To have it embellishment, my life is too abundant.

Among all kinds of music, pop music is my favorite.

Pop music the reason that is called because

it's the most popular sort of music at the present generation and generally accepted. Most of all, it can express my mood and feelings. No matter how my mood is delight, angry, sorrow or happy, it can express my feeling vividly and fluently. Furthermore, everybody can compose it by oneself. In my senior high school's period, someone writes words and compose music about our class. Whenever I listen to the song, it makes me recall my high school’s everything. And it can make ours heart to approach and no distance.

And my major is percussion, so I like all music is relative to percussion. It can makes everyone vitality, shocking and delight. It also can bring everyone’s mood to high. It because that is my love. Also like this, I can study it diligently and bring the best music for everybody. Thanks for your listening.

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    改的用大寫表現希望你可以看看為何要這樣改 才會進步

    Hello, everyone. Today I'm going to talk about my favorite music. AS A EIGHTEEN YEARS OLD STUENDT(GIRL OR BOY), I HAVE TO HAND ON with music everyday. AS IN my DAILY life, MUSIC HAS BEEN AN UNSEPERAT ELEMENT ALREADY. Music makes me FEEL pleasure everyday. SINCE MY LIVE IS FULL OF BURDEN, MUSIC IS AS LIGHT AND SALT IN MY LIFE.

    Among all kinds of music, pop music is my favorite.The reason Pop music that BE called becauseit's the most popular sort of music at the present generation and generally accepted. Most of all, it can express my mood and feelings. No matter how my mood is delight, angry, sorrow or happy, it can express my feeling vividly and fluently. Furthermore, everybody can compose it by oneself. DURING my senior high school YEARS, someone writes words and compose music about our class. Whenever I listen to the song, it makes me recall my high school’s everything. And it can make ours heart GETING TOGETHER and FEELING NO distance AT ALL.

    And my major is percussion(?), so I like all music WHICH is relativeD to percussion. It can makes everyone vitality, shocking and delightING. It also can bring everyone’s mood to high. It because that is my FAVORIT SO I can study it diligently and bring the best music for everybody. Thanks for your listening.

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