? 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

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Hi everyone! As I’m an outgoing person. I would love to talk about myself. I’m a person who loves to make friends, and also loves to meet different kinds of people. I think it’s probably because I’m from southern Taiwan, so it makes me into a person who is full of passion towards people. And, with this passion, I have become interested in drawing, painting and creating stuff. While senior high, I decided to develop my skill of designing. I even chose this as my major in college. So far, can you guess what's my major in FCU? Yes, it’s architecture! Even though I like to make friends, there still are some kinds of people that make me feel so uncomfortable to be with. Namely, it’s fake people. With all above I’ve talk about, has made me think that I have the strength in news broadcasting. Indeed, I do have the skill of pronunciations which is my second and also the main strength in news broadcasting. After my interview of all this, I know you all wondering what’s my name is, and now I am going to tell you what my name is in English and in Chinese. My English name is Katherine which you can call me Kat or Kathy, and real name is Yu-Chieh Chien. Appreciate for your participate! Have a nice day and good bye!

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  • 1 0 年前
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    Good morning, ladies and gentlemen(看當時面試時間上午或下午而定). My name is Katherine, or you also can call me Kat or Kathy. As I'm a very outgoing person, I'd like to tell you more about myself today for our fist contact. I like to make friends with different kinds of people. I think it's because I'm from the friendly south part of Taiwan, which makes me as a passionate person and also easygoing with people. With my unique southern passion and friendliness, I have become interested in drawing, painting, and designing. I decided to develop my designing skills while in senior high school, so I chose design-related subject as my major in college. Would you like to know what my major in Feng- Jai University is? No doubt, I major in architecture. I like the idea of putting my passion with people into the ice-cold architecture design to make the project more interesting and closer to people's need.

    Above-mentioned, I am very fond of getting to know more people through different ways of presenting myself and delivering my thoughts to others. News brocating for me is quite a special way of getting closer to the public and staying a very interactive relationship with people.

    Most important of all, with my personality, good pronunciation in Chinese(English), and proper communication skills,I think I have the confidnece to see myself doing well in news broadcasting field.

    Thanks for your valuable time. Have a nice day.

    (這看來應該是面試時的自我介紹稿,改了些許部份,因為只能單從妳寫的內容來猜想,如果妳可以多把自己對於新聞傳播領域的喜好傳達給面試者,或許可以更令面試者印象深刻,或者是妳如何從學習建築設計而移轉到喜歡新聞傳播媒體的部份來著墨,也是個不錯的介紹,以便讓面試者可以在有限時間內了解到妳想要學習新聞傳播媒體的意願,anyway,希望對妳的面試有所幫助!)

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  • 1 0 年前

    2號的第3行 fist contact-> first contact!! otherwise, good godd!! kek

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    Hi everyone! As I’m an outgoing person. I would love to talk about myself. I’m a person who loves to make friends, and also loves to meet different kinds of people. I think it’s probably because I’m from southern Taiwan, so it makes me into a person who is full of passion towards people. And, with this passion, I have become interested in drawing, painting and creating stuff. While senior high, I decided to develop my skill of designing. I even chose this as my major in college. So far, can you guess what's my major in FCU? Yes, it’s architecture! Even though I like to make friends, there still are some kinds of people that make me feel so uncomfortable to be with. Namely, it’s fake people. With all above I’ve talk about, has made me think that I have the strength in news broadcasting. Indeed, I do have the skill of pronunciations which is my second and also the main strength in news broadcasting. After my interview of all this, I know you all wondering what’s my name is, and now I am going to tell you what my name is in English and in Chinese. My English name is Katherine which you can call me Kat or Kathy, and real name is Yu-Chieh Chien. Appreciate for your participate! Have a nice day and good bye!

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