小棱 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

幫我檢查文法對不對~~2句商業回信~~謝謝

Dear Sirs,

Thanks for your inquiry.

Mr. Wi is on a business trip to Japan. He will respond you soon after he return next Monday.(請問這2句怎麼改成一句?? -Mr. Wi 現在出差到日本,他下星期一回來時會再回覆你)

Best regards,

煩麻各位了!!謝謝

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  • 1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    Dear Sir,

    Thanks for your inquiry.

    Mr. Wi is on a business trip to Japan and will reply to you ASAP after he returns on Monday.

    Best Regards

    2006-11-30 11:58:16 補充:

    你本身的句子就很正確。其實沒有必要合併句子唯一的小失誤只是 “when he return" 的 return 要加"s". 因爲第三人稱 ^_^

    參考資料: me
  • 1 0 年前

    Dear Sirs,

    Thanks a lot for your inquiry.

    Mr. Wi will not respond you until next Monday because his business trip to Japan.

    Best regards,

    參考資料: me
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