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幫忙我檢查文法有對嗎?......急!!! thanks

請大家來看看,這樣寫好嗎??是要申請簽證用的一封信,但是不知道文法有沒有錯.........因為很急(明天要用了 )所以我會給多一點點數,謝謝大家了

december 4,2006

dear Official:

im XXX was at 29/11,2006 at here interview but that day i get a latter about 214(B) and Was recognized takes for the disqualification can it be that

immigrates the visa. i think its because my informations not prepare good. so this time i take this information to proof this just a vacation and hope you can understanding when i finished this vacation will come back to taiwan.

this is Document list that i prepare this time:

1.The household register transcribes this

2.Student identity card

3.certification of account balance

4.CERTIFICATE OF EMPLOYMENT

5.my airplan ticket list

6.my friend and his family Invitation letter

7.travel plan

8.the income tax list

if need more informations please tell me , thank your time.

Respectfully,

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  • 1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    Dear Officer,

    I'm XXX; I was going to have an interview here on 11/29/06. However, I got a letter about 214(B) which showed that I was recognized for disqualification. I think it was because my information was not prepared well enough. Therefore, I bring up the following information to proof that I apply for the visa is just for vacation purpose. I hope you can understand and trust me that I will come back to Taiwan after this short trip.

    This is the document list that I prepared this time:

    1.The household registration form

    2.Student identification card

    3.Certification of account balance

    4.Certification of employment status

    5.Plane ticket receipt which shows the return date

    6.my friend and his family Invitation letter

    7.travel plan

    8.the income tax list

    If you need more information, please tell me. I will be happily provide it.

    At last, I appreciated your understanding. Thank you so much.

    Respectfully,

    2006-12-05 02:51:47 補充:

    I was going to have an interview here on 11/29/06.----->這句錯了 呵呵 要改成 I had interviewed on 11/29/06.

    參考資料: 自己
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  • 1 0 年前

    4th December 2006

    To whom it may concern,

    My name is XXX and I attended an interview on 29/11/2006 following a letter regarding 214(B) and was notified that I had not been granted the visa for which I applied. I believe that this was due to the fact that my details were not prepared correctly. However, this time I am providing you with the proof that I will be on vacation and hope you will understand that when this vacation is over, I will return to Taiwan.

    I have provided you with the following documents:

    1. Household register transcription

    2. Student identity card

    3. Certification of account balance

    4. Certificate of employment

    5. Airplane ticket list

    6. Invitation from my friend and his family

    7. Itinerary

    8. Income tax list

    Should you require any further information, please don’t hesitate to let me know.

    Thank you very much for your time.

    Yours faithfully

    參考資料: Me (英國人)
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  • 1 0 年前

    december 4,2006

    December 4 2006

    dear Official:

    To whom may read this letter:

    im XXX was at 29/11,2006 at here interview but that day i get a latter about 214(B) and Was recognized takes for the disqualification can it be that

    immigrates the visa. i think its because my informations not prepare good. so this time i take this information to proof this just a vacation and hope you can understanding when i finished this vacation will come back to taiwan.

    I am XXX and was interviewed on Nov. 29 2006. However, I recieved a letter about 214(B) which is disqualification for the immigration visa. I think the failure since I didn't prepare very well on my information. So, this time I will provide a vacation information and hope you will understand the situration. After the trip, I will back Taiwan again.

    this is Document list that i prepare this time:

    Document List:

    1.The household register transcribes this

    2.Student identity card

    3.certification of account balance

    4.CERTIFICATE OF EMPLOYMENT

    5.my airplan ticket list

    6.my friend and his family Invitation letter

    7.travel plan

    8.the income tax list

    if need more informations please tell me , thank your time.

    Respectfully,

    參考資料: My bad English
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