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My name is XXX. I am seventeen years old. I was born in Teipei,Taiwan.

There are six people in my family members, including my father, who is a scrivener, my mother, who is a banker, my brother, who is a student, my grandmother and grandfather. I do have a really sweet family. They are always there to be my support whenever I’m in sorrow and to share in my joy whenever I’m in delight.

I’ve been interested in English when I was eleven years old. At first, I studied in cram school for about two years. During forth grade to six grade. In the Summer vacation. My parents let us(I and brother) to attend Canada. Astralia camp for about 1~2 months. In Canada.We go there by ourselves. And we joined theres’ language school. We met a lot of countries students there. We live in host family.They take care us. I remember that we love play in their back yard.We had a lot of fun there. In Astralia, We attended language school,too. And we did fed the kangaroo. And this time we had the graduate certificate. It’s really cool that we got graduate certificate from another country.

In my spare time, I like to surf on Internet, because it’s the fastest way to know some information that I need. I also can talk with my friends on Yahoo Messenger.

And I like to buy something from here. It’s easy way to me buy stuff without going out. Sometimes I like to go hang out with friends. We share something that about school.family.job.

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    It really needed A LOT of work. Here it is:________________________________________My name is XXX, I am 17 years old and I was born in Taipei, Taiwan.There are six people in my family; including my father, who is a scrivener, my mother, who is a banker, my brother, who is a student, my grandmother and grandfather. I have a really sweet family. They are always there to support me when I feel down or to share in my happiness.I have been interested in English since I was 11 years old. At first, I studied in a cram school for about two years from the 4th to the 6th grade. During the summer holidays, my parents allowed my brother and I attend camps in Canada and Australia for about 2 months. We went there by ourselves and enrolled in a language school where we met students from all over the world. During our stay, we lived with host family who took care of us. I remember that we loved to play in their back garden. We had a lot of fun there. In Australia, We also attended a language school. While we were there we did a lot of interesting things, including feeding a kangaroo. We also obtained a graduate certificate which I am especially proud of.In my spare time, I enjoy browsing the internet because it’s the fastest way to obtain the information that I require. I also enjoy talking with my friends on Yahoo Messenger and shopping on the Yahoo auction website as it is an easy way for me to buy things without having to go out. Sometimes I like to go and meet with my friends and talk about school, family or work.

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