Elaine 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

【20P】修正英文文法…(文章)

各位大大麻煩一下,幫我看是否有文法錯誤的地方,

請幫我修正...謝謝~

I was remember my mother when I was a baby. She looked kindly

in my memory. My mother was not tall. She was 150 cms and 40 kgs.

She had a long black hair and dark brown eyes. My mother always

wore a T-shirt and a long skirt. When I was a child, She was taking

care me careful. The weather was clod, she told me to wear a lot. If

I was hungry, she could cooked many delicious food. I learned how to

kindly to treat people. She was a greatness mother.

When I was a baby, I remember my father. He was a serious

person, so he looked seriously. My father was 170 cms and 67 kgs.

He had a very short hair and dark brown eyes. My father wore a shirt

and pants. He was a build worker so he was busy to his job. I learned

earnest in every things.

My father and mother have a good relationship because they

could not to fall out for a tiny things. They have been live together for

twenty years. My father and mother were considerate of each other so

they can to keep good relationship at present.

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  • 1 0 年前
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    應該要改成下面的文章(如有修改的部份,我用" "表示)

    I "remembered" my mother when I was a baby. She looked kindly

    in my memory. My mother was not tall. She was 150 cms and 40 kgs.

    She had a long black hair and dark brown eyes. My mother always

    wore a T-shirt and a long skirt.When I was a child, "She always took

    good care of me". "When" the weather was clod, she told me to wear a

    lot. If I was hungry, she "would" cooked many delicious food. I learned

    how to "be" kindly to treat people. She was a greatness mother.When I

    was a baby, I "also" "remembered" my father. "He was a serious

    person. "My father was 170 cms and 67 kgs. He had a very short hair

    and dark brown eyes. My father wore a shirt and pants. He was a build

    worker so" he was always busy." I learned earnest in every things.

    My father and mother have a good relationship because they

    could not to fall out for a tiny things. They have been live together for

    twenty years. My father and mother were considerate of each other so

    they can to keep good relationship at present.

    大概就是這樣,如果有改錯或沒改的話,那真是對不起。

    2007-06-13 19:26:27 補充:

    蝌蚪改ㄉ真不錯

    他ㄉ英文一定很好

    多學學他喔

    參考資料: 自我知識
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