? 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

英文,請幫我糾正錯誤

Everything is okay.

Seems you give me a tough problem. Because of I didn’t have any foreign friends around me. So I only can give you some suggest that I think about. You think a doll is a normal gift, and how about a card makes by your hand? I think it will be a really good present for a friend. People would like things made by yourself more than a gift by spend money. You can buy some fancy papers and try to write down some words you want to say. It’s really easy and significant. If you think you can’t make a beautiful card that you can come to my store find me. I’ll help you. If you really didn’t have enough time, you can come to my store and pick up something that you liked.

Just do your best on everything.

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  • PG
    Lv 6
    1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    您若是提供這段短文想表達的意思,我想會比較好。例如第一句以及最後一句,由於不了解針對的事物,有點摸不著頭腦。另外有些時式的使用請您要注意唷!以下為個人的愚見,還請其他高手指教。

    Everything is okay.

    Seems you gave(用過去式較恰當) me a tough problem. Because(Because of + 名詞/動名詞) I didnt have any foreign friends here. So I only can give you some suggestion(suggest是動詞) that I think about. You thought a doll is a ordinary(normal較偏向"正常"的意思) gift, how about a card made by yourself? I think it will be a really good present for a friend. People would think things made by yourself more valuable(有價值的) than to buy a gift . You can buy some fancy paper(paper為不可數名詞) and try to write down some words you want to say. It's really easy and significant. If you think you can't make a beautiful card then you can come to my store. I'll help you. If you really don't have enough time, you can come to my store to choose(pick up的意思是從地上撿起東西) something that you like.

    Just do your best on everything.

    參考資料: 自己
  • 1 0 年前

    Everything’s fine. I don’t have any foreign friends so I am not really sure. I can only give you one of my own suggestions. If you think a doll is a boring gift, then how about a handmade card? I think it would be a really good present for a friend. People usually prefer things that people have made over a shop-bought gift. You can buy some fancy paper and write some words that you would like to say. It is so easy to do and has so much significance. If you don’t think that you can make a beautiful card then you can come to my shop and I’ll help you. Also, if you don’t have enough time then you can come to my shop and get something you like. Do your best.

    參考資料: Me (英國人)
  • Jill
    Lv 4
    1 0 年前

    幫你改通順一點 因為你的斷句太多 連接詞也沒使用妥當

    上面的大大也沒幫你改出來

    Everything's okay.

    Seems that you gave me a tough problem to deal with. Since I don’t have any foreign friends, I can only give you some suggestion on my own.

    You think a doll as a gift is nothing special, then how about a card made by your own hands? I think it will be a really good present for a friend. People always prefer things made by own hands than a "bought gift". You can buy some fancy papers and try to write down some words you want to say. It’s really easy and significant. If you think you can’t make a beautiful card, then you can come to my store, and I’ll help you. If you really don’t have enough time, you can come to my store and pick up something that you like and we will figure something out.

    Just do your best on everything.

    參考資料: 自己
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