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此篇文章是是否有文法錯誤or不通順的地方?

可以請各位先進幫我看看這篇文章有哪些文法錯誤的地方or可以文章改的比較通順嗎?謝謝~~~

Diary about what I did yesterday

My name is Rinchen Wu and I’m a student. Usually, I get up early, have breakfast, and go to work at nine o’clock. I go to school all day, finish studying at about 5:20 p.m. and go home right away. I have dinner at 6:30 and usually go to bed around 11:00 p.m. Yesterday, I didn’t wake up until 10:00 a.m. I got up immediately and got dressed. I didn’t have breakfast and left my house at 10:30. I had a class in 10:10 a.m. I was an hour late and didn’t go to school until 11 o’clock. I went out for lunch at about 12:30. I studied my lesson and did the report hard in the afternoon. I was doing a lot of things. I left school at about 4:30 and didn’t get home until 9:00 p.m. In the evening, I went to see one of my best friends. I’ve known her for quite six years. We don’t meet for a long time when we graduation. I talked with my friend for about all evening. We talked about a lot of different subjects, ours university life and our old friends. We asked a lot of questions for each other. I was two hours late and didn’t have dinner until 9:30 o’clock. I watched to the television for two hours when I have dinner. After dinner I read the newspaper for a while and made some telephone calls. I went to bed at midnight. I was so tired. I slept soundly all night last night.

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    Diary about what I did yesterday

    My name is Rinchen Wu and I’m a student.

    (我的名字是Rinchen Wu而且我是一位學生)

    I usually get up early, have breakfast,and go to school at nine o’clock. (我常常起的很早,吃早餐然後九點鐘出門上學去)

    I go to school every day.School finish at about 5:20 p.m. and I go home straight away (or immediately).

    (我每天都去學校,放學時間大約是5.20而且放學後我馬上回家)

    I have dinner at 6:30 and usually go to bed around 11:00 p.m.

    (我6.30吃晚餐,然後大約11.00上床睡覺)

    Yesterday, I didn’t wake up until 10:00 a.m.

    (昨天,我一直睡到早上十點)

    when I knew what was the time I got up immediately and got dressed.

    (當我知道現在是幾點的時候我馬上起床刷牙洗臉)

    I left my house at 10:30 and I didn’t have breakfast .

    (離開家裡大約10.30而且我並沒有吃早餐)

    I had a class at 10:10 a.m. but I arrived school at 11:00.

    (我早上10.00有課要上,但是我11.00才到學校)

    so I was nearly an hour late. I went out for lunch at about 12:30.

    (所以我幾乎遲到了一個小時,12.30時我出去外面吃午餐)

    After lunch I started my lesson and worked hard in the afternoon.

    (吃過午餐後我開始了我下午的課程,我非常專心的上課)

    I had done a lot of things. I left school at about 4:30 I wasn’t at home until 9:00 p.m.

    (我做了很多事情,我大約4.30離開學校但我一直到9點才回到家裡)

    Before I went home, I went to see one of my best friends.

    (在我回家之前,我去看了我的其中一個好朋友)

    I've known her for nearly six years.

    (我認識她幾乎快六年了)

    We haven’t met each other for a long time after we graduated.

    (自從我們畢業後有很長一段時間沒有見過對方)

    I talked to her about what had happened in the afternoon.

    (我跟她說了今天下午發生的事情)

    We asked a lot of questions to each other.

    (我們互問了對方很多問題)

    Like our subjects, ours university life and our old friends.

    (像我們選的科目,學校生活和以前的老朋友)

    I was two hours late for dinner and I hadn't eaten anything until 9:30 o'clock.

    (我晚了兩個小時吃晚餐而且我到9.30之前都沒吃過任何東西)

    I watched the television when I ate my dinner.

    (當我吃晚餐時我順便看個電視)

    After dinner I read the newspapers for a while and made some phone calls.

    (晚餐後我看了一下報紙和打了幾通電話)

    I went to bed at midnight. I was so tired and I slept soundly that night

    (12.00時候我跑去睡覺,我好累而且我睡的很熟)

    2006-12-12 07:05:42 補充:

    看來知識沒辦法讀縮寫阿

    所有的(’)都是縮寫符號

    我想你應該也懂....

    參考資料: 我自己, 還是我自己
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