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英文難題~ 夠*的就來幫我找出錯的地方 送20點喔 給最好的

XXX have been developing a series of aluminum alloy products with professional technique and accurate apparatuses.

We always concentrate on contrivance and quality control. For current trend of marketing requirement, XXX create the new generation aluminum computer desk which is produced by accurate apparatuses, Laser segment, and hand work, there a alot of pratical functions to satisfying all your need, specially process surface to avoid scratch, solid and durable, clean easy, usable, durable over 20 years.

XXX is famous on high quality and innovative design of PC case at IT market, Now we've developed an elegant and multi-function integrative computer, combined most of PC accessories, Cables, Power plug in the desk, there is no any mess wires, cables on the table, and easy to get the assistant kits such as multimedia I/O for reading your memorial card of digital camera, power plug for charging mobile phone, foldable stand for personal belonging, and hardware stand for printer or scanner, you can handle all the things on the desk, and save precious time.

This humanized design desk creates a clean and efficient working enviroment for you.

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不好意思 要是覺得整句不好的話 也可以換掉喔 但不要偏移主題就好 感恩啦

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抱歉喔 我不是要翻譯 我是想要把這幾句話寫個更完整 更美好 所以別誤解摟 謝謝喔

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  • 十年
    Lv 4
    1 0 年前
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    be famous for ~

    famous後面應該接for才對

    2006-12-17 01:11:12 補充:

    humanized design desk

    改成humane-designed desk比較好

    2006-12-17 01:20:30 補充:

    combine A with B

    所以combined 後面要加上with

    2006-12-17 01:29:06 補充:

    most of PC accessoriese

    在of和PC中間加上the比較好

    而且accessoriese包括哪些呢

    如果後面再加上, such as 例子A, 例子B...會更好

    2006-12-17 03:05:21 補充:

    Cables, Power plug in the desk.....phone,

    改成

    In-the-desk wires and cables give you a clear tabletop free of mess and make it easy for you to get the I/O for downloading the multimedia files like those of a digital camera or the plug for charging your mobile phone.

    2006-12-17 03:10:49 補充:

    foldable stand for personal belonging.....time.

    改成

    Foldable stands, where the printer, scanner, and etc. belong, let you be able to deal with all the business at the desk and avoid wasting time on moving back and forth in the office.

    2006-12-17 03:21:01 補充:

    Now we've developed an elegant and multi-function integrative computer

    改成

    Now we've developed an elegant and multi-function computer desk

    2006-12-17 05:57:24 補充:

    We always concentrate on contrivance and quality control.

    改成

    We are always devoted to production diversification and quality control.

    2006-12-17 05:58:40 補充:

    For current trend of marketing requirement.....need,

    改成

    Leading the market trend, XXX offers you the 2G computer desk, which is manufactured by means of the last industrial technology, providing the best practical functions in order to satisfy all you need.

    2006-12-17 05:59:27 補充:

    specially process surface to avoid scratch, solid and durable, clean easy, usable, durable over 20 years.

    改成

    2006-12-17 06:05:51 補充:

    Solid and durable, the computer desk is resistant to scratch, remaining unused in at least 20 years.

    不好意思!

    我是從後面倒回去看的,

    才會改得這麼亂!

    真的很不好意思!

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  • 匿名使用者
    1 0 年前

    XXX 一直用專業技術和準確的儀器發展一系列鋁合金產品。

    我們總是專心於發明和質量管理。 對於市場需求的目前趨勢來說, XXX創建被準確的儀器,鐳射部分和手工勞動生產的新代鋁計算機書桌, 那裡為了滿足你的全部需要pratical 功能的alot, 特別是處理表面避免劃去,固體和耐用,越過20年打掃容易,可用,耐用。

    XXX 在IT 市場關於PC機情況的進階品性和革新的設計是著名的, 現下我們已經發展一台優雅和多功能的綜合的計算機, 結合的大多數的PC 附件,電報,動力插上書桌, 沒有任何混亂電線, 在桌子上的電報, 並且容易為讀你的數位相機的紀念卡片找象多媒體I/O 那樣的助手工具, 為收費移動電話的能力塞子, 個人屬於的摺疊的立場,並且硬體代表印表機或者掃描器,你能在桌面上處理全部事情,並且節省寶貴的時間。

    這賦與人性設計桌面給你創造一個乾淨和有效率的工作環境

    參考資料: Dr.eye
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