peiyu 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

有那位英文高手,可以幫我修改此段文章??

有那位英文高手,可以幫我修改此段文章,總覺得文法及文章內容也不順,希望可以用更簡單及生活化的句子來表達。謝謝!!

I'm going to introduce my favorite snoopy stamps.

Now you can see these stamps, which I bought at the Lantern Festival this year.

The stamps and the postcards have Taichung's scenic spots and the building, which match the lovable snoopy illustration, moreover the release is limited snoopy, items and they are valuable.

I have also collected probably had 6 year very special things, including snoopy chip box, the fish burg's packing paper and the paper bag from McDonald's release 50th anniversary

So , I will collect any items with snoopy on them.

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  • poly
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    1 0 年前
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    I'm going to introduce my favorite snoopy stamps.

    Now you can see these stamps which I bought at the Lantern Festival this year. There are scenic spots and buildings about Tai Chung on the stamps and postcards, which are accompanied with lovely snoopy illustrations. Moreover the release is limited version about snoopy, so they are valuable. I have collected these special things for almost 6 years, including snoopy chip box, fish burg's packing paper and paper bag from McDonald's for the 50th anniversary release. I will keep on collecting any items with snoopy.

    給你參考一下,希望和你要表達的意思接近。

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  • 1 0 年前

    你ㄉ文章需要修改

    文法錯誤

    第5航ㄉyear要加s

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