發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

請問這樣的英文文法可以嗎?

如題,謝謝

Q:Would you like to be as wealthy as the people your've heard about in this lesson?

A:I think I would like to be Martha Stewart, but I don't want to imprison.

She is smart,rich and independent.

Q:Can money buy happiness?Why or Why not?

A:Yes,sometimes I would like to buy something to make me happy....and I think money is very important and necessarily but it isn't everything..

Q:What would you do if you won the lottery?

A:I will put the money in the bank...and buy a diamond ring to please

myself....

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  • 1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    你寫得很好, 在我看來只有錯少少的一點點 ^^

    第一題==>I don't want to go to jail. (imprison不是"被關"而是"關別人", 改成被動的be imprisoned也可以, 但還不如說go to jail來得白話些。)

    第二題==>

    buy something改成buy things比較好, 因為something主要是當作代名詞使用的。

    money is very import and necessary (不是necessarily)

  • Kevin
    Lv 7
    1 0 年前

    A:I think I would like to be Martha Stewart, but I don't want to

    be imprisoned. She is smart,rich and independent.

    A:Yes,sometimes I would like to buy something to make myself

    happy....and I think money is very important and indispensable but it

    isn't everything..

    A:I will put the money in the bank...and buy a diamond ring to please

    myself....

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