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The Valuable Wealth

Friends play a very important role in our life. Good friends can make your life more wonderful and colorful, otherwise bad friends can harm you in many circumstances unconsciously. It is so hard for us to choose friends because many people like to pretend differently from their real personalities. Most people confuse about the definition of true friendship, and I have three opinions about it. First, if a person who helped you when you were in danger, and he or she never wanted you to repay an obligation to him or her. It is a true friendship. Second, when you feel so sad in mid-night that you must talk to someone immediately; and that person is willing to stay with you. It is true friendship. Third, if most people would not believe you anymore, yet your friend is willing to believe you. It is true relationship.

My friend, Janet, is a very kind and easygoing girl, and she is my best friend during junior high school. At first, I did not notice her because she always stayed in a corner and kept silence. We had totally different personalities, so I felt amazed that she could be my best friend. I still remembered that I did not get along with my classmates well when I was in junior high school, and no one wanted to be my partner when teacher assigned us topic for discussion. I felt very disappointed that I wanted to give up this course. Janet requested our teacher that if I could join her group; and teacher agreed to her request. I deeply appreciated for her kindness, and from then on, an intimacy grew up between us. I think it is a kind of true friendship.

I have a friend named Jimmy, who habitually cannot sleep. He sought advice from doctor on this matter, and he has tried many ways to heal the sickness. However, his efforts did not get any good effects returned.

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  • 1 0 年前
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    希望這對你有幫助~~

    Friendship plays a very important role in our life. Good friends can make your life wonderful and colorful. However, bad friends can harm you in many circumstances unconsciously. It is hard for us to distinguish the goods from the bads because people act differently from their real personalities. Most people are confused about the definition of true friendship but I have three definitions for it. First, if a person who helped you when you were in danger, and he or she never wanted you to repay as an obligation, it is a true friendship. Second, when you were down in the mid-night that you must talk to someone immediately; and that person is willing to stay with you, it is a true friendship. Third, if most of the people did not believe in you anymore, yet someone is still willing to believe you, it is a true relationship.

    My best friend during junior high school, Janet, is a very kind and easygoing girl. At first, I did not notice her because she always stayed in the corner and kept silence. We had totally different personalities, so I felt amazed that we could be best friends. I still remembered that I did not get along with my classmates well when I was in junior high school, and no one wanted to be my partner when teacher assigned us topic for discussion. I felt very disappointed that I wanted to give up this course. Janet made a request to our teacher that if I could join her group; and teacher agreed to her request. I deeply appreciated her kindness, and from then, we have been very close. And this is what I called a true friendship.

    In another case, my friend named Jimmy, who has insomnia. He sought advice from a doctor, and he had tried many treatments to heal the sickness. However, his efforts did not get any return.

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  • 1 0 年前

    The Valuable Wealth

    Friends play a very important role in our life. Good friends can make your life more wonderful and colorful, but bad friends can unconsciously harm you in many situations. It is so hard for us to choose friends because many people like to act differently from their real personalities. Most people are confused about the definition of true friendship and I have three of my own opinions about it. First, if a person who helped you when you were in danger, and he or she never wanted you to repay him or her, it is a true friendship. Second, when you feel so low one mid-night that you must talk to someone immediately; and that person is willing to stay with you, it is true friendship. Third, if most people would not believe you anymore, yet your friend is willing to believe you, it is true relationship.

    My friend, Janet, is a very kind and easygoing girl, and she is my best friend during junior high school. At first, I did not notice her because she always stayed in a corner and kept silence. We had totally different personalities, so I was amazed that she could be my best friend. I can still remember that I did not get along with my classmates well when I was in junior high school, and no one wanted to be my partner when the teacher assigned us topics for discussion. I felt so disappointed that I wanted to give up this course. Janet had asked our teacher if I could join her group; and tthe eacher agreed to her request. I deeply appreciated her kindness, and from then on, an intimacy grew between us. I think it is a kind of true friendship.

    I have a friend named Jimmy, who cannot sleep normally. He had sought help from his doctor on this matter, and has tried many treatments to cure this sickness. However, his efforts did not get any positive return.

    希望有幫助!

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