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有人可以教我寫這封英文商業書信嗎?拜託!

有人可以教我寫這封英文商業書信嗎?拜託! 內容是對方在四月十日下單訂購55部FTV-298電視,本公司已在五月十五日運出,隨即發現誤運FTV-258,現已緊急再度送貨,預計五月三十日可到,比原先的日期晚了兩天,必須寫一封信,表達致歉。此外,本公司在六月十日,舉辦創業二十五週年的酒會,本人誠摯邀請Mr. White 蒞臨指導,並親自當面再度致歉。

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    Dear Sir,

    We had shipped out the 4/10 order for television model FTV-298(55 sets) on 5/15. However, we found that we had shipped the wrong model FTV-258 afterwards; now we have already re-shipped the correct models, which the estimated arrival time would be 5/30. We are terribly sorry for the mistake that make the shipment 2 days later than schedule. We will be more careful in the future in order to avoid similar mistake happening again. Please accept our sincerely apology.

    In addition, we will have a 25th annual party on this 6/10. We would like to sincerely invite Mr. White as our precious guest and we will apologize this matter to him face by face.

    Best Regards,

    XXX

    以上的時間, 都是四月五月六月, 因為我想說現在都已經12月了, 所以我覺得時間上, 不知道是2006還是2007年...

    所以我都沒把年份打出來, 但是一封正式的商業書信, 一定要再日期把年份打出來... 所以年份方面, 你就自己更正吧...

    參考資料: 自己, 作國外貿易+留學美國9年的我
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