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求助英文達人,英文短文檢查錯誤(school?)....

這是1-2分鐘要背起來的問答,我用很爛的英文寫好了,

請英文達人幫忙改錯,文法方面可能亂七八糟,請不要恥笑我.

內容可任意發揮,好心的人可以幫我加油添醋,

但單字請簡單一點點,不然我背不起來,非常感謝您

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Q:你通常都如何都學校?

A:我通常開車到學校,

第一個原因是省時,因為開車走高速公路只要1小時,

但是搭火車再轉捷運,再坐公車進學校,大約要2個小時.

第二個原因是舒適和自由,車上的空調讓人覺得沒有酷暑及寒冬,

不怕下雨,可以大聲聽音樂和背英文,

可隨時去想去的地方,不用等公車或火車.

但開車也有缺點,

第一個原因是油錢太貴了

第二個原因是當塞車或精神差 不好時會打瞌睡,這樣會有點危險.

但整体說來,我是喜歡開車上學的.

Q:How do you usually get to school?

A:I usually drive to school.

The fist reason is to save time, because drive to school by freeway,

just take one hour, but take train and MRT and bus to school,

it takes 2 hours

The second reason is comfortable and flexible,

the car's air condition let us feel hot summer and cold winter is not exist,

we would not afraid of raining,

we could listening music and reciting English loudly,

and we can go anywhere at anytime, need not waiting bus or train.

Driving to school ,

the first disadvantage is too much money spend on gas,

the second is when traffic jam or spirit not good will feel sleepy,

it is very dangerous.

Overall I like drive to school.

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  • 1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    Q:How do you usually get to school?(這句話正確)

    A:I usually drive to school. (第一句話正確)

    (第二句話因為比較長,而且有句子結構性的問題,所以建議像以下的方式寫。)

    The first reason is that it saves time. It takes only one hour to drive by (way of the) freeway, but it takes 2 hours to get to school by train, MRT, and bus.

    第二個原因是舒適和自由,車上的空調讓人覺得沒有酷暑及寒冬,不怕下雨,可以大聲聽音樂和背英文,可隨時去想去的地方,不用等公車或火車.

    The second reason is comfortable and flexible*1.

    the car's air condition let* us feel* hot summer and cold winter is* not exist*2, we would not afraid*3 of raining, we could listening* music and reciting*4 English loudly, and we can go anywhere at*5 anytime, need not waiting*6 bus or train.

    其實若要以列舉的方式來陳述許多事實,而此事實又包含許多含有帶有動詞的片語或句型,在不熟悉要如何分配句子的結構的情況之下,可以分幾個句子寫,以求正確。

    *1. 第二個原因是更為舒適,更具彈性。這樣的寫法當然也看得懂實際意思,然而英文句型注重邏輯,建議這樣寫會更好:

    The second reason is that it is comfortable and flexible. "it" 在這裡指的就是"driving to school"

    *2. 這個句子一口氣出現了四個動詞,let 後面放原型動詞feel沒錯,但是後面又出現了一個is, 緊接著exist又是另一個普通動詞。這句話應該這麼改寫:

    The air conditioning in the car lets us feel as if cold winters and hot summers does not exist.

    *3. afraid是個形容詞,故前面要記得放個beV.

    *4. could是個住動詞,故後面所放的動詞,要回復成為原型。

    *5. anytime是個副詞,故前方不用介係詞。

    *6. need not 只有need當助動詞的時候可以用,如果need是助動詞的話,後面就只可能會出現原型動詞,所以wait就不會是動名詞形式。

    所以這整句話這麼改:

    Besides, (除此之外,因為前面已經提到不怕寒暑的這個理由,如果後面還有其他的原因,可以以此承接) we can listen to music, and recite English loudly without having to worry about the rain. When we have to go anywhere anytime, it is not necessary to wait for the bus or the train.

    但開車也有缺點,

    But there are disadvantages for driving, too.

    第一個原因是油錢太貴了

    the first disadvantage is too much money spend on gas. (這句話有點接近,而且還是挺高級的句型。

    The first disadventage is that too much money is spent on gas.

    錢是被花的,所以記得用被動態。但是如果是要簡潔易懂的話,可以用較簡單的說法:)

    The first reason is that gas is too expensive.

    第二個原因是當塞車或精神差 不好時會打瞌睡,這樣會有點危險.

    The second reason is that it can be dangerous to feel tired and sleepy in traffic jams.

    但整体說來,我是喜歡開車上學的.

    因為上述原因有好有壞,最後必須選擇較喜歡的,故建議用prefer這個字。

    But in general, I still prefer to drive to school.

  • 匿名使用者
    6 年前

    我一直都有過敏狀況,是最近才知道要用防螨寢具的,因為醫師建議我用,我也考慮了很久,想說要買就買最好的,上個月趁網站有折扣的時候買了一組【北之特】防蹣(螨)寢具來用用看,真沒想到~~現在覺得過敏狀況有改善多了。雖然比一般的貴一些,不過~真值得!

  • inch
    Lv 5
    1 0 年前

    I usually drive to school. There are some advantages and disadvantages go as follows.

    我通常開車上學,以下是開車上學的幾個優點和缺點。

    First of all, it is in terms of saving time that I think driving to school is a good idea. That is, I can go through freeway if I drive. Driving through highway takes only one hour while taking train, MRT and bus to school could spend 2 hours or more.

    第一,我覺得開車上學可以節省時間。因為如果開車的話,我可以走高速公路,只要花一個小時的時間,而撘公車,捷運或是搭火車上學的話,可能會花上兩個小時或是更多的時間。

    Secondly, it is much more comfortable and flexible to drive than others. Car’s air condition makes me ignore hot summer and cold winter. By the way, I wouldn’t be worried about being soaked in rainy day. In addition, I could not only listen to music but also recite English loudly in cars without bothering others. Most important, I can go to wherever and whenever I want by driving my own car while I could be limited if I go by bus or other transportation.

    第二,開車比起其他交通工具更加方便且有彈性。汽車的空調讓我忽略了炎熱的夏天和寒冷的冬天。此外,我也不用擔心在雨天的時候被淋濕。再者,我不只可以在車裡大聲聽音樂也可以大聲背英文,而不用擔心打擾到別人。最重要的是,開著自己的車,我想去哪就去哪,不論何時何地,而撘公車或其他交通工具的話,往往會被限制住。

    Driving to school, however, has several disadvantages as well. First, I might spend much money on gas and parking lots. Besides, looking for a parking space could take much more time than taking public transportation. Second, I would feel sleepy when I am in a traffic jam or I am tired. It would be very dangerous then.

    然而,開車上學也有一些缺點。第一,我可能會花很多錢在加油和停車位上。而且,找停車位所花的時間,有可能比搭大眾運輸工具還要久。第二,如果塞車禍是感到疲倦的時候,我會想睡覺,這樣的話會很危險。

    To sum up, although driving could make certain problems, I think it is still convenient to go to school. Thus, I like to drive to school.

    總而言之,雖然開車可能會造成一些問題,我還是覺得開車上學很方便。因此我喜歡開車上學。

    我幫你改成比較完整的一篇講稿,

    照這樣講會比較有條理, 結論也比較完整..

    因為文章最重要的是前後連貫和通順

    (不管是speaking或是writing)

    所以像是besides, in addition, however, 這些簡單連接詞都可以多使用,

    還有因為你前面講的是開車的優點, 所以將三個優點層遞排列

    用first of all, secondly, most important可以表現出你的條理和順序,

    最後, 因為你前面比較過了開車的優點和缺點,

    所以建議結論還是先提到"儘管有缺點"

    再說"我仍然喜歡開車", 這樣會比較完整喔!

    以上, 給你參考看看, 有問題歡迎發問!

    參考資料: 自己
  • 1 0 年前

    Q:How do you usually get to school?

    A:I usually drive to school.

    The first reason is that I don’t need to waste too much time, because drive to school by freeway just takes me an hour, but go to school by train; MRT or bus usually takes me 2 hours.

    The second reason is more comfortable.

    The car's air condition lets us feel not so hot in summer time and not cold in winter.

    We are not afraid of raining days.

    We can enjoy music and recite English loudly

    and we can go anywhere at anytime

    We don’t need to wait for the bus or train for a long time.

    對不起,我不是高手,也沒看你的中文翻譯,我是照你文章上不通順的地方修改的,太晚了我已兩眼呆滯,最後一段沒改,希望幫的上忙。

    2006-12-26 14:48:05 補充:

    1. car's air conditioner

    2. don’t=do not的縮寫,出現奇怪亂碼了。

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