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Revise the following praragraph to elimate unncessary shifts in person, number, tense, mood and voice

Driving in snow need not be dangerous if you paractice a few rules. First,one should avoid fast starts, which prevent the wheels from gainning traction and many result int thecar's getting stuck. Second, drive more slowly than usual, and you should pay attention to the feel of the car: if the steering seemed unusually loose or yhe wheels did not seem to be grabbibg the road, slow down. Third, avoid fast stops, which lead to skids. One should be alert for other cars and intersections that may necessitate that the brakes be applied suddenly. If you need to slow down, the car's momentum can be reduced by downshifting as well by applying the brakes. When braking, press the pedal to the floor only if you have antilock brakes, otherwise, the pedal should be pumed in short bursts. If wheel should be turned into the direction of the skid, and then the motions, the skid would be stopped and the speed of the car would be reduced.

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    Driving in snow need not be dangerous if you practice a few rules. First, "you" should avoid fast starts, which prevents the wheels from gaining traction and may result in the car's getting stuck. Second, drive more slowly than usual, and you should pay attention to the feel of the car: if the steering seems unusually loose or the wheels did not seem to be grabbing the road, slow down. Third, avoid fast stops, which lead to skids. "You" should be alert for other cars and intersections that may necessitate that the brakes be applied suddenly. If you need to slow down, the car's momentum can be reduced by downshifting as well by applying the brakes. When braking, press the pedal to the floor only if you have antilock brakes, otherwise, the pedal should be pumed in short bursts. If the wheel should be turned into the direction of the skid, and then the motions, the skid would be stopped and the speed of the car would be reduced.

    大致上 這篇文主要的問題是再第三人稱跟第二人稱的SHIFT

    "You"跟"One"不可混用

    另外這篇文很多的文法跟拼字錯誤@@

    這樣看的會有點累

    希望幫的上忙~

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