cathy 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

請幫我看看這英文食譜,念起來是否口語化

這是一個甜品的英文食譜,不知道念起來夠不夠順暢?

又或者裡面有沒有用錯字、用錯詞?

麻煩大家看看囉~^^

<<Green Tea Jelly>>

First , Mix green tea powder in hot water , Set aside .

Then , Combine jelly powder and sugar and mix well .

Slowly pour in the cold water and mix well .

Bring to a boil , then remove form the stove .

Next , Add green tea mixture .

Finally , Pour into molds . When it has cooled , chill in the refrigerator .

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補充~~這是中文翻譯

1.抹茶粉與熱水調勻備用.

2.果凍粉和細砂糖混合後,冷開水慢慢加入拌勻,並加熱制沸騰後離火。

3.加入抹茶液混合。

4.倒入模型中,冷卻後放入冰箱冷藏。

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謝謝2位網友回答,我這一份英文食譜是要上台實做給同學聽的。

昰要邊說邊做,所以才要口語化!

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  • 1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    Then , Combine jelly powder and sugar and mix well .

    這句話比較不好

    First, we need to make some green tea

    put the green tea powder into hot water,mix well, set aside

    Second, put jelly powder and sugar into a bowl and mix well

    Third, pour in cold water slowly and mix well

    Then, heat the mixture until boiling

    Remove it from the stove when it is boiling

    Next, add the green tea

    The last step is to pour the mixture into molds.

    And we're done.

    請停頓10秒

    When they are cooled, put them into the refrigerator for 3 hours.

    After that, you can enjoy the yammy Green Tea Jelly.

    最後的地方提到時間, 可以再修改

    good luck

    參考資料: i've never been to me
  • Lisa
    Lv 6
    1 0 年前

    首先,這是要念給孩子聽的嗎?

    如果是的話,建議有些字不要用得太過艱深,

    否則孩子會聽不懂,也會弄不懂。

    <<Green Tea Jelly>>

    1.抹茶粉與熱水調勻備用.

    First , Mix green tea powder in hot water , Set aside .

    -->First, mix green tea powder in hot water and set aside.

    2.果凍粉和細砂糖混合後,

    Then , Combine jelly powder and sugar and mix well .

    -->Then, blend jelly powder and sugar together.

    冷開水慢慢加入拌勻,

    Slowly pour in the cold water and mix well .

    -->Slowly pour in cold water and mix well.

    並加熱至沸騰後離火。

    Bring to a boil , then remove form the stove .

    -->Boil it, then remove from the stove.

    3.加入抹茶液混合。

    Next , Add green tea mixture .

    -->Next, add the mixture.

    4.倒入模型中,冷卻後放入冰箱冷藏。

    Finally, Pour into molds . When it has cooled, chill in the refrigerator .

    -->Finally, pour it into the molds.

    When they're cool, refrigerate them to cold.

    2007-01-03 21:26:23 補充:

    你翻得很棒了,我只是稍微改一些些而已。

    參考資料: 自己, 自己
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