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In Dream General Manager

I want to work as a hotel general manager, that first must strengthen following several.

First, diligently increases my language ability and through the national English test, like this can be very smooth in the hotel links up with the foreign customer.

Second, strengthens the related hotel some specialized knowledge, like this can manage the good staff in the hotel and to supervise their behavior.

Third, I am going to promote own affinity, so first can bring more customers for the hotel.

Fourth, I concern the regular participation to the hotel lecture, like this also can promote own is on site the response.

Finally, I will go abroad go tourism every year, will have a look the overseas hotel to have what good and bad points with own hotel.

Now, I slowly will enrich oneself achieve the dream the high point.

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    In Dream General Manager

    I want to work as a hotel general manager, that first must strengthen following several.

    correct: I want to work as hotel general manager so first of all I have to strengthen the following points.

    First, diligently increases my language ability and through the national English test, like this can be very smooth in the hotel links up with the foreign customer.

    Correct:First, I have to deligently increase my language ability and pass English test. Consequently, communicating with foreign customers wouldn't be a bar anymore.

    Second, strengthens the related hotel some specialized knowledge, like this can manage the good staff in the hotel and to supervise their behavior.

    Correct:Second, enhance the knowledge related to the hotel. Then I will be capable of managing the staff members and supervise them.

    Third, I am going to promote own affinity, so first can bring more customers for the hotel.

    Correct:Third, I will reinforce my ability in order to get more customers for the hotel.

    Fourth, I concern the regular participation to the hotel lecture, like this also can promote own is on site the response.

    Correct:Fourth, attending regular meetings related to the hotel management, so I can clearly identify my responsibility.

    Finally, I will go abroad go tourism every year, will have a look the overseas hotel to have what good and bad points with own hotel.

    Correct:Last but not least, I plan to go abroad annually and observe different hotels to learn their merits about how to run a hotel well.

    Now, I slowly will enrich oneself achieve the dream the high point.

    Correct:Now. I will reach my goal as soon as possible.

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