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My english nema is cookie, chinese name is Gin,yu gun,there are six people in my family,my father is a civil service and mother is a house wife,i have three younger sisters。 I am going to talk about my personality,i am lively and cheeriness,i like shopping and singing,not only chating but alos drink tea with my... 顯示更多 My english nema is cookie, chinese name is Gin,yu gun,there are six people in my family,my father is a civil service and mother is a house wife,i have three younger sisters。
I am going to talk about my personality,i am lively and cheeriness,i like shopping and singing,not only chating but alos drink tea with my friends。
i am freshman of China University of Technology,i hope i can graduate successfully and aftere i graduate from China University of Technology, i would like to get more higher degree。

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