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About my personality, I am spontaneous, independent, flexible, kind, peaceful, loyal, thoughtful and compassionate at strength. And at weakness, I am nave, disorganizes, stubborn, lazy, fearful, worrier, too sensitive and moody. I have more weaknesses at personality than strengths in a whole. I think I should improve these weaknesses of me and become a better person.

In the fast few years, in fact, I have changed my personality very much. I was very shy before. But after senior high school, I became lively. I have to thank for my classmates because they affected me and changed me. And I was also very restrained. I thought everything should be ruled before. After my friends affected me and I started to understand I should have my own opinion.

My personality changes depending on my friends from senior high school. They are very kind and funny. I remember when I was in second form, one of my friends, Carol; she nominated me as a section chief in the class. Finally, I won the election and I needed to deliver a short speech to all classmates. I was very shy but I told myself not to be afraid. So I braced up and then I feel happy in the end. It was nice to talk to the audience. After this affair, I changed myself to another person who was very easygoing until now.

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    我有幫你改或刪除一些字, I hope that's alright:

    Regarding my personality, I am spontaneous, independent, flexible, kind, peaceful, loyal, thoughtful and compassionate. However, my weaknesses are that I am nave, disorganized, stubborn, lazy, fearful, worrisome, sensitive and moody. I have more weaknesses than strengths as a person. I think I should eliminate these weaknesses and become a better person.

    In the fast few years, in fact, my personality has changed quite a bit. I was very shy before. But after senior high school, I became lively. I have to thank for my classmates because they affected and changed me. I was also very restrained by the rules before. I thought everything should go according to the rules. After my friends affected me and I started to understand that I should have my own opinions.

    My personality changed depended on my friends from senior high school. They are very kind and funny. I remember when I was in second form, one of my friends, Carol, nominated me for section chief in the class. At the end, I won the election and I needed to deliver a short speech to my classmates. I was very shy but I told myself not to be afraid. So I gathered my courage and then I felt happy at the end. It was nice to talk to the audience. After this affair, I have became someone who is easygoing.

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