採夢天地 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

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Give up..later..shadow..again..deprive..use..yr..comet..power..gather..revive..produce..failure..goods..start..in large quantities..surroundings..living thing..absorb..energy..one after another..absorb..body..mistake..decrease..)..distinguish..cooperation..cooperate..decide..machine..switch..again..start..disappear..have.They succeeded at the end, all the people were embarrassed because he or she took everything off, and Houon was answered in former state.

It treasures it in the mind with the recollection that it comes even if the last one of the seven days is slow, Max ..regret.. however nothing but does the greeting of Jirachi and the separation, and Jirachi associates through all eternity.

The moral lesson: and by mistake, and there is often a dream of me who should achieve it by a right method on the lever why. It is hoped to make an effort so that everyone may achieve all its dreams for one new year.

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但不死心的Butler尾隨在後,並再次將Jirachi奪了過來,利用匯集到的千年彗星的力量,復活了Groundon,然而造出的Groundon卻是個失敗品,他開始大量吸收周遭的生物作為他的能量,May、Brock和Dianne相繼被吸收,Butler在體認到自己的錯誤後,並決定和Ash及Max聯手合作,將機器的開關重新啟動,以消滅Groundon。最後他們成功了,所有人都脫困了,Houon也回復了原狀。

而七天的最後一晚也來臨了,雖然捨不得,但Max也只有和Jirachi道別,並將和Jirachi相處的回憶永遠珍藏在心中。

這個故事告訴我們,知錯能改,善莫大焉,還有自己的夢想應該要靠正當的方法實現。在新的一年裡,希望大家都能努力實現自己的夢想!

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    Butler did not give up, secretly following them, he successfully rescued Jirachi again and brought Groundon back to life with absorbing the enormous power from the comet. However, the one created by Butler was a failure because it started to gain enormous energy by absorbing the beings surrounding to it. May, Brock, and Dianne were absorbed and gone one by one. Butler decided to cooperate with Ash and Max after he realized that he did it wrong. They turned on the power of the machine in order to kill Groundon. Finally they did it, and everyone was rescued; Douon has been back to its original way.

    The night of seven days after has come. Max and Jirachi got no choices but had to leave each other. Max decided to remember and put all of the memory with Jirachi deep in the heart.

    The story reveals the fact that it is all good if people have known that what they did before is wrong and have stopped doing those evil activities. People should achieve their goals by applying proper ways. I hope that eveyone can achieve their goals(or dreams) in the new year!

    希望有幫到你 =)

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