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In different countries and cultures around the world free time is spent in different ways. The results of the Harris Poll showed that reading was the most popular spare-time activity in the United States. This was followed by watching TV, then spending time with family. In a U.K. survey on leisure-time activities, watching TV and videos was the most popular pastime; listening to the radio came second.

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  • 1 0 年前
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    In different countries and cultures around the world → In different countries and cultures (wordy, different countries 本身就包含 the world)

    free time is spent in different ways → free time is spent differently (wordy) → people spend free time differently

    In different countries and cultures around the world free time is spent in different ways. → In different countries and cultures, people spend free time differently (少了逗號)

    The results of the Harris Poll showed that reading was the most popular spare-time activity in the United States. (you need to cite the title of the survey and the year)

    → The "XXXX" contacted by Harris Poll showed that reading is the most popular spare-time activity in the U.S.

    This was followed by watching TV, then spending time with family. (OK)

    In a U.K. survey on leisure-time activities, watching TV and videos is the most popular pastime. Listening to the radio comes second. (除非你的 source 不適用現在,你要用 present tense)

  • 1 0 年前

    用不同的國家和文化在世界自由時間附近被花費用不同的方式。哈里斯民意測驗的結果表示, 讀書是最普遍的spare-time 活動在美國。這被看跟隨了電視, 然後花費時間與家庭。在在休閒時間活動的英國勘測, 觀看的電視和錄影是最普遍的消遣; 傾聽收音機其次來了。

    參考資料: yahoo的字典
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