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請各位英文高手幫幫忙~幫忙訂正錯誤~謝謝

最近寫了故事,共有六則,內容有翻成英文,可是我英文不好,所以需要各位英文高手幫忙訂正一下錯誤.非常感恩~

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第二則

我做了一只鳥籠。要送給在舊金山的爸媽。我將箱子裝好後,就把蓋子釘上。準備寄東西給爸媽。我傳真給舊金山的爸媽。通知他們我要寄東西過去。他們跟我說了地址。我把爸媽在舊金山的地址寫在一張紙上。避免忘記。

我爸收集外國硬幣。目前已經有好幾百種的外國硬幣了。而我會收集玩具火車。不過目前只有收集到兩種。還在努力收集中。

我妹喜歡卡通影片。妹妹做完家庭作業就去看電視。因為太陽太大,就把窗簾拉上。我家櫃子的葡萄酒是葡萄釀成的。我會拿來偷喝。不過被爸爸發現到我偷喝酒,就又要罵我了。我家的拖鞋通常是在室內穿的。雖然我常常穿到外面去。媽媽在家的時候都會因為這麼罵我。

我家的時鐘敲響十點。十點一到就要準備午餐。要提早準備免得來不及。

跟我同學通完電話之後,拿起打掃用具,開始整理客廳的環境,整理完的客廳變得好乾淨。

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I made a cage for birds.

Want to give parents in San Francisco.

When I've packed the box, hammer the lid on.

Prepare to send thing to my parents.

I fax to my parents in San Francisco.

I want to send thing to be past.

They said an send with me.

I write on a piece of paper in the address of San Francisco parents.

Avoid forgetting.

My Dad collects foreign coins.

Currently there has been very several 100 kinds of of foreign coin.

I collects toy trains.

However only collect to two currently.

Return in the effort the collections.

My younger sister enjoy cartoons.

She'll watch TV after I finish her homework.

Because the sun is too big, draw the curtain.

My house cupboard's wine is made from grapes.

I will take to steal to drink.

However is found by father I steal to drink, wanting to scold me again.

My slippers are usually worn indoors.

Although I usually wear to the outside.

Mother at home is would of scolding me.

My house's the clock struck ten.

10:00 will prepare lunch.

Want to be in advance to prepare in case too late.

With after my classmate finish telephone.

Picked up to sweep tools .

Start tidying up the environment of the living rooms.

The living room that tidies up to finish becomes very clean.

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    I have made a birdcage. Give to the parents in San Francisco. As soon as I put the case well, I nail the cover. Plan to send things to parents. I fax the parents who give San Francisco. Notify them that I want to send the things and go over. They have told me the address. I write the addresses in San Francisco of parents on a piece of paper. Avoid forgetting.

    My father collects the foreign coin . There is hundreds of kinds of foreign coins well at present. And I can collect the toy train . But only collect to two kinds at present. Still in making great efforts to collect.

    My sister likes the cartoon film. The younger sister will go to watch TV after finishing the homework. Because the sun is too big, pull on the curtain. The grape wine of my home cupboard is led to of grape. I will bring and drink secretly. But found to I drink secretly , scold me again by father . Our slippers are usually worn indoors. Though I often pierce through to the outside. Mother will all scold me in this way when being at home.

    Our clock beats ten points. Is it plan lunch just to reach over ten o'clock. It is too late that plan ahead of time to so as to not make.

    Classmates finish openly to pick up and sweep the apparatus , begin to put the environment of the sitting room in order after the telephone with me, the sitting room that is finished putting in order becomes very clean.

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