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請各位英文高手幫幫忙~幫忙訂正一下~謝謝

因為英文不好,需要各位英文高手幫忙訂正一下錯誤.非常感恩~

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第四則

今天的風很大,葉子從樹上落下。我用木板將窗釘上,免得窗戶被吹走了。這房子是用磚砌成的,不是用木頭造的,所以不用擔心房子會被吹走。屋旁那棵樹的分枝長到了屋頂上,這些樹生長著濃密的樹葉。爬到樹上去看一下風景,卻發現了一隻鳥,我猜這是一隻知更鳥。看到了樹上的蜘蛛網,我沒看到過蜘蛛織網,倒是蠻好奇的。

  以前想養一條狗看家,可是媽媽嫌太麻煩便不給我養。現在要出門都要擔心房子會不會遭小偷。我有一把傘,那把傘在門口。目前看天氣應該是用不到。

  我走到家門口,發現坐在長椅上的那個女生看上去很面熟。原來是我妹在門口等我回家。我穿著以前媽媽買給我的一雙網球鞋,慢慢的走到家門口。我告訴妹妹,四點鐘吃茶點。打開錢包,開始在錢包裡找一些硬幣,準備去買點心。買了熱狗當點心。

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The wind was very strong today.

Leaves fall from the trees.

I boarded up the windows.

In case the window is blewed away.

The house is brick, not wood.

So don't need to worry the house will be blewed away.

The tree near the house branched over the roof.

The trees are thick with leaves.

Climbing to the tree goes up to take a look scenery.

Found a bird.

I guess the bird is a robin.

Come in sight of the spider's net of the tree.

I never seen a spider spin its web.

I am curious.

I want to keep a dog to guard the house.

But the mother dislike bother not give keep.

Wants to go out to all want to worry the house can encounter burglar now.

I have an umbrella.

That umbrella is in the doorway.

Seeing weather currently should be could not use.

I walk to come home doorway.

The girl sitting on the bench looked familiar.

It is my younger sister to wait for me.

I wear mother bought me a pair of tennis shoes.

Walk to come home doorway slowly.

I tell a younger sister that we have dessert at four o'clock.

I opened his wallet.

I began hunting in her purse for some coins.

I go to buy a dessert .

Bought hotdog to be a dessert.

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  • 1 0 年前
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    The wind was very strong today and leaves were falling from the trees. I boarded up the windows in case they were blown away. The house is made of brick, not wood so there is no concern about the house being blown away. A tree near the house branches over the roof and the other trees are thick with leaves. When I climbed the tree to look at the view I found a bird. I think it was robin. I also saw a spider’s web in the tree. I have never seen a spider spinning its web before and I’m very curious about it.I wanted to keep a dog to guard the house but my mother didn’t want the trouble so she didn’t let me have one. Now whenever I go out I worry about the house being burgled. I have an umbrella which I keep in the doorway. Looking at the weather, I don’t think I will need it.I came to the doorway and I saw a familiar looking girl sitting on a bench. It turned out that it was my younger sister waiting for me. I was wearing the tennis shoes that my mother bought for me and slowly walked to the front door. I told my sister that we will have a snack at four o’clock. I opened my wallet, looked for some change and got ready to go and buy it. I bought a hotdog.

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