書信修改:How about your weekend

Dear xxxx,

How about your weekend?

I just finished a dinner with my family tonight, we went to Eslite book store in Xin Yin district. There is a stunning night view at the restaurant, which we can look out of window seeing 101 building in the night.The restaurant's name is " The library" that have a little bite expensive meal prices. However, I think it is worthy for a family dinner to enjoy music, wonderful window view and elegant atmosphere, and the food as good as well.

I am glad that you like "Peter Rabbit" which drawed by Miss Potter. I am looking forward to seeing this movie.

By the way, the website you mentioned about Photography collection, yes I like it very much. There are loads of fantastic pictures. I think that the website tend to show us art style photos. Thank you for sharing me that.

Have a nice dream.

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兩位在我眼裡答的都很好,因為我區分不出那裡文法有錯,等高人幫我"仲裁"一下啊。

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  • 1 0 年前
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    Dear xxxx,

    How was your weekend?

    I just finished dinner with my family tonight, and then we went to Eslite book store in Xin Yin district. There was a stunning night view at the restaurant where we could see 101 Building through the window at night.The restaurant's name was 'The Library' where the price of food is a little bit expensive. However, I thought that it was worthy for a family dinner for enjoying music, wonderful view, elegant mood, and the food as well.

    I am glad that you like "Peter Rabbit" which drawed by Miss Potter. I am looking forward to seeing this movie.

    By the way, I like the website you mentioned about the photography collection very much. There are loads of fantastic pictures. I think the website tends to show us artistic photos. Thank you for sharing me that.

    Have a nice dream.

    有些文法上的錯誤

    我把他改寫的比較口語化

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  • 1 0 年前

    我有一個地區名寫錯了。

    Xin Yin district應該改成 Xin Yi district(信義區),去掉n才對。

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  • 我大致幫你修飾一下吧, 盡量不要去更改到你的意思

    Dear xxxx,

    How about your weekend?

    I just finished having dinner with my family tonight, we went to Eslite book store in Xin Yin district. There is a restaurant which has stunning night view of 101 building standing in the night. The restaurant's name is " The library" that is a little bit expensive of meal prices. However, I think it is worth for a family to have dinner and enjoy music, wonderful window view and elegant atmosphere, and the food is as good as well.

    I am glad that you like "Peter Rabbit" which drawed by Miss Potter. I am looking forward to seeing this movie.

    By the way, the website you mentioned about Photography collection, yes I like it very much. There are a lot of fantastic pictures. I think that the website tends to show us art-style photos. Thank you for sharing me with this website and information.

    Have a nice dream.

    基本上, 只有一些文法跟拼字的問題, 我大概改了一下, 應該沒有問題吧, 如果有其他的問題再問我吧, 我會盡量幫你的

    參考資料: 自己, 作國外貿易+留學美國9年的我
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