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關於英文作文的問題(請英文高手的大大們幫幫忙!!)

以下是我寫的英文作文

請幫我改一下哪裡有錯誤或者哪裡文法不對~~

Once upon a time , there had a haughty boy named John , he likes to

boast his skill and every didn't like him due to he was a pride and conceit person .one day , he was boost his skill a again , he boast that he

possessed a mink coat , which can use fire to burd , and still as excellent as before . All of the people didn't believe hime andasked him to burn it

on the spot , Five minutes later , a coat was reduced to ashed , and John

feel embarrassed in the presence of large company . hence, he didn't

show off anymore .

The moral lesson : A person should not with pride but with humble , as a

result of this , you are popular with everyone.

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  • Al
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    1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    Once upon a time there was a haughty boy named John, who liked to brag about his skills, and nobody liked him because he was such a bigheaded and conceited person.

    One day he was bragging agin. He said he had a mink coat that endured fire. That you could burn it and it would still be as good as before. All the people did not believe it and asked him to burn it on the spot. Five minutes later, the coat was reduced to ashes, and John was embarrassed in front of the big crowd. After that, he did not show off any more.

    The moral lesson is that we should not be haughy but humble. In the end, you will be a popular person.

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