發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

幫我看看文法那邊有錯. 感恩

I'm a Taiwanese. Unlike my coworkers in Taiwan, I never went to other country for vacation. My colleagues always tell me how fun it is going to difference places and experiencing different cultures. I'd like to be like my coworkers, who have a long vacation for trip to enrich their experience. On the other hand, I really don't have time to do such things. I have entire family needs me to take care of.

我想要和我同事一樣有一個長假去旅行,來增廣見聞.

(上面的英文這樣寫會怪怪的嗎?)

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  • 1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    I'm a Taiwanese.並無不可

    Unlike my coworkers in Taiwan, I never went to other country for

    vacation.

    "in Taiwan"為贅言 應避免重複 後部有經驗與否 應儘量用完成式

    I have never went aboard 以 "go aboard" 表出國較常見

    My colleagues always tell me how fun it is going to difference places

    and experiencing different cultures.

    "it is"後方補語以不定詞為之較佳 並可共用一個to

    --to go to different places and experience different cultures.

    其中 difference應該只是你的筆誤

    I'd like to be like my coworkers, who have a long vacation for trip to

    enrich their experience.

    一字儘量不二用 積極找尋簡潔替代方案較好 例如學過的假設語氣

    I wish I were them,...

    後部時態再與之配合 ...,they can get a long vacation for trip to

    enrich their experience.

    On the other hand, I really don't have time to do such things.

    副詞 really的標準式位置 是夾在 "don't have"之間

    I have entire family needs me to take care of.

    這句最無章法 have.needs雙主動詞不合文法 亦非子句.片語

    最簡潔貼近你原意的改法

    The whole family need my care.

    "whole family"單複數同形的全家人 "care"改以名詞簡單呈現

    2007-02-06 05:03:09 補充:

    I have never "went" aboard

    "went"為過去分詞 gone之筆誤

    2007-02-06 05:13:02 補充:

    I have never "went" aboard

    "went"為過去分詞 been之筆誤

    頭腦想的是been 打上去卻還是gone

    可見夜半腦力也是只剩對半 cc

    參考資料: myself
  • 高み
    Lv 5
    1 0 年前

    I'm a Taiwanese======= I come from Taiwan.

    Unlike my coworkers in Taiwan, I never went to other country for vacation.

    Unlike those around me, I' ve got no chance to go abroad for a vacation.

    My colleagues always tell me how fun it is going to difference places and experiencing different cultures. I'd like to be like my coworkers

    Those who have been abroad keep telling me that it's fun getting there to experience such exotic things different than we have

    I'd like to be like my coworkers, who have a long vacation for trip to enrich their experience

    I hope one day I could do as they did to enrich my life.

    On the other hand, I really don't have time to do such things. I have entire family needs me to take care of.

    By contrast, there is a big family on my shoulders. I cannot do as they did.

    2007-02-05 23:10:59 補充:

    參考一下 吧 但願能幫你

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