I used to walk to school in senior high school.
It took me about an hour on foot from my house to school.
I had to across a big park before I arrived the school, but it was the greatest part.
I would find a quiet place to sit and read English about half an hour after entering the park.
Sometimes, I would raise my head and look at the birds on the tree, listening to their cheeping.
This sight is helpful to keep me in a good mood all day.
That is the reason why I walk to school every day but I never feel bored.
- stevehfchenLv 51 0 年前最佳解答
I used to walk to school when I was in senior high (school).
The school was about an hour away from home on foot.
To get to school, I had to cross a big park, but that was the best part of the whole journey.
After entering the park, I would find a quiet place and read English for about half an hour. "After entering the park"放後面不行，會覺得它在修飾 "half an hour"，也就是說，它成了 "進入公園半小時後"。
Sometimes, I would raise my head to look at the birds on the trees and listen to their chirping. "cheep" 這字是說很尖銳的鳥叫聲。chirp 比較合適。
The sight was helpful to keep me in a good mood all day.
That was the reason why I walked to school every day and never felt bored.
2007-02-08 21:03:59 補充：
改成 Sometimes, I would look up the trees and listen to the chirping birds. 或Sometimes, I would look up to watch the birds on the trees and listen to their chirping.
再者，這句是以 Sometimes 開頭，下一句又接 The sight was helpful…，那意思是說因為只有 sometimes 會抬頭看，並不是每一次都會心情好囉？所以建議再改成 The walk through the park was helpful…
2007-02-14 22:33:07 補充：
我是貼比較長的回答的那位，另外一位回答者說得沒錯（投票中，所以我也不曉得他是哪位），我的確忽略了 read English 這個錯誤。study English 才對。
- ａｎｎａLv 61 0 年前
第4句忘了for= read English for about...
English 加book或其他東ㄒ會比較通順.除非是要說study English.