? 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

請問這英文句子有錯誤的地方嗎

All in one, women are safer drivers. Beacuse of their attitude. Men can learn to become safe drivers. If they adopt the attitude that an automobile is merely a convenience.

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  • 鈺純
    Lv 4
    1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    基本上是沒什麼大錯誤, 不過可以連成一句句子的片段被分成了好幾段. 我覺得應該這樣寫:

    All in all, women are safer drivers because of their attitude toward driving. Men can learn to become safe drivers if they adopt the attitude that an automobile is merely a convenience.

    (比較不會句點那麼多)

    參考資料: 自己
  • 1 0 年前

    All in all, women are safer drivers than men because of their attitudes toward driving. Men can learn to become safe drivers if they adopt women's attitudes so that an automobiles is merely a convenience.

    參考資料: the answer of 晴天下的幸運草 with minor revision
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