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麻煩高手幫我改一下這篇文章

看文法結構是否有錯誤,或是句子是不是有不通順的地方,還有那些需要糾正的地方,麻煩各位囉^^

Notebook is the most unforgettable present that I have ever got. It is from my boyfriend, Mark, as a birthday gift. He gave it to me on my twentieth birthday after we had been together for two years. The notebook was bound in a pink lace tie in a bow. The color of the cover is red which symbolized his endless passionate love to me. It also has two little cat sit side by side on ground looking at a distant horizon, and the middle part of the cover write the word” To My Sweetheart.” He wrote everything since the day we had met, including the first time we started to date, to kiss, and to make love, even the quarrels between us or every words I and said to him. When we argued about something trifling or I felt depressed about our relationship, I always flipped the pages and read it again and again till I forgot those disturbing things and feeling. And now we are together for four years and feel like we just began. I will never forget everything you have done to me and the most memorable present you had given me. I love you, baby.

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  • 1 0 年前
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    My notebook is the most unforgettable present that I have ever got. It is

    from my boyfriend,Mark. He gave to me as my twentieth birthday after we been together for two years. The notebook is bound in a pink lace

    tied into a bow, and it is in red which symbolizes his endless and passionate love to me. There are also drawing of two lovely cats sit side by side

    looking at a far distant. Underneath the drawing is the title of the

    notebook - To My Sweetheart. My boyfriend wrote everything ever since the day we met, the first date, the first kiss, and the first night we sleep together, even the small fights we had. Everytime I feel down, I always try to read this notebook he wrote for us, and all the sadness just melted away. Today, we have been together for four years and I still have the feeling we are fresh in love. Thank you for everything you have done for me and the notebook full of our memories. I love you,baby.

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  • 1 0 年前

    A notebook has been given to me from my boy friend on my birthday. This notebook, unlike any other ones, there is actually a special meaning impacted withen it. As my twentieth birthday, also the day that meant our relationship has been lasted for two years, Mark, my boyfriend, gave me this uniqe present as a gift. Within it, he has written down the memories between us, every single day of our relationship has been recorded down since the time we met, the first time we dated, we kissed and the chemistry flowing between us. Every time after we argued, I would always flip through the pages of the notebook, and after seeing the great time we have been together, it always makes me feel better. Never again I was depressed after looking through it. After so many times of flipping through this special gift, I can't even remember how many times I have been going through this, nevertheless, I have never get tired of it. Still remembered the moment he gave this to me, it was bound with a pink lace tie in a bow. The red cover symbolized his endless passionate love for me. It also has two kittens sitting side by side on the ground, looking towards the horizon distant away, and in the middle, of the cover is printed witht he word” "To My Sweetheart.&rdquo". Four years have passed by, and four years we have been together, but it still feels like we have just met. I will never forget any thing that you have done for me, and also the most memorable present you have ever given me. I love you, baby.

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