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請幫忙修正英文文法(20)

Jack在下午三點半在地上發現兩千塊

Jack at 3:30 P.M. of time find two thousand dollars on the ground

Jack花了五分鐘思考他該如何運用這筆錢

Jack spent for five minutes to considering him how should make use of this money

最後他決定將錢贈送給乞丐

He decides to present this money to the mendicant finally

而乞丐也很有禮貌的說謝謝你

and the mendicant also says very politely that thank you

-------------------以上第一篇---------------

Harry正在思考哪些東西是屬於對身體沒有幫助的垃圾食物

Harry is considering which things is belong to have no helpful garbage food to the body

Harry記得上課的時候老師有講解到哪些是屬於垃圾食物哪些是健康食物

Harry remembers to have a class of the time teacher has already explained in detail to which is belong to the garbage food which is a healthy food

所以不健康的食品是可樂,健康的是牛奶

so the food of the ill-health is a cola, healthy is a milk

--------------------以上第二篇------------------------

Fred在尋找他哥哥的家,但是卻迷路了

The Fred is looking for his elder brother's house, but getting lost

路人拿著地圖跟Fred說,要沿著Main Street走,到Second Avenue時左轉的7-11旁邊 

The stranger takes map to say with Fred, want to follow the Main Street to walk, turn to the left while going to the Second Avenue of 7-11 flank

於是Fred終於找到他哥哥的房子並見到面

Hence the Fred finds out his elder brother's house and sees finally

---------------------以上第三篇------------------

就拜託各位大大了 因為我的英文超級爛= =

所以上面文句都是用翻譯軟體中翻英的

但是被朋友說有嚴重文法錯誤

所以想上來請英文文法專家替我修正一下三篇內容的文法

由於是規定需要 所以麻煩"每篇"的英文單字最少都要有50個

謝謝了>< 我會乖乖奉上20點的>

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  • 1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    Surprisingly, Jack found two thousand dollars on the ground at three thirty in the afternoon. Then, Jack spent five minutes thinking about how to use the money well. Finally, he decided to give it to the begger who has not eaten for three days. As result, the begger said "Thank you" politely.

    Harry is thinking about the junk food which are not healthy to our bodies. Harry remembers that the teacher has mentioned about what the junk food were and the healthy food were during classes. Hence, coke is the food which is bad for health and in contrast, milk is the healthy one.

    Fred was looking for his brother's house, but he got lost somewhere that he did not know. In the meantime, a stranger took the map and tole Fred that he must walk along Main Steet and turn left on Second Avenue, and he would see the house which he was looking for next to a 7-11. Within the stanger's help, Fred found his brother's house and met each other finally.

    應該是這樣寫~~~翻譯機翻的太恐怖~~~所以沒有幫你改~~sorry

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