Shawn Kuo 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

請幫我看英文心得 謝謝

The Adventures Of Tom Sawyer

By Mark Twain Adapted By Monica Kulling

Main Character :Tom , the main character of the story , he is an orphan ,his chief support is his aunt ,Polly.

Other Important Characters : Huck , whose father always drank a lot and didn’t have to go to school or school .

Becky , who is the special one of Tom.

Theme : The author used acidulous words by the contrast between Tom and villagers.

Main Conflict : The main point of the story is a serious of murder , that Tom and Huck saw in a midnight.

Genre : Caricature

Point Of View : Third Person

Thoughts of the story :

Every characters in the story symbolize appearances or our feelings in the society , though Tom dose not do well in school but his innocence and adventure is the one who I want to be . By the murder , we know deeply that the society has many things which we can see its injustice . Unfortunately , we always afraid to get troubles so we act like Tom and Huck what they did before they find themselves that they can not be still under lots of pressure in their lives . Maybe we need more bravery than others because we might influence people for what we do . Tom and Huck seems to stand for our characteristics , we want to tempt everything . On the other hand , we also escape from the situation if it is too bad for us . Nowadays , everyone chases after good material life but we come to ignore our spiritual life . Sometimes , we even unaware that why we do . Good or bad is not considered by others , life , is easy for you despite people will not agree with you . The last but not the least is to keep going on your decisions and goals .

已更新項目:

謝謝你們喔!! 我倒是沒有先寫好中文拉@@" 或許 是我就是所謂的"用中文想英文" 不知道這種壞習慣怎麼改呢? 我有很努力在看一些技巧書在抓感覺 但寫出來 好像還是很中文化~"~ 目前要高二下了

2 個已更新項目:

有機會可否 一下MSN 或 留一下呢?! 謝謝你們 我的是:po6699945@yahoo.com.tw

3 個已更新項目:

c 沒關西拉^^ 對了 寄給Xerxes信 有收到嗎?

2 個解答

評分
  • 1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    你寫的不錯!!真的不錯~只是我有一點小建議讓你整個文章唸你來比較順. 整個改點你放在word 裡看會比較清楚吧

    The Adventures Of Tom Sawyer

    By Mark Twain Adapted By Monica Kulling

    Main Character : Tom, he is an orphan, his main support aunt, Polly. (已經講過main character 所以不必再寫一次)

    Other Important Characters : Huck , whose father always drank a lot and didn’t have to go to school.

    Becky , who is the special one of Tom.

    Theme : The author used irony words to contrast between Tom and villagers. (諷刺在這種方式都用 irony)

    Main Conflict : The main point of the story is a serious murder , that Tom and Huck saw in a midnight.

    Genre : Caricature

    Point Of View : Third Person

    Thoughts of the story :

    Every characters in the story reflects our feelings towards society , though Tom did not do well in school but his innocence and adventure is the one who I want to be . From the murder, we know deeply that our society has surrounded by many injustice incidences. Unfortunately, we are always afraid to get troubles so we act like Tom and Huck, what they did before they find themselves that they can not be still under lots of pressure in their lives. Maybe we need more bravery than others because we might influence people for what we do. Tom and Huck seems to stand for our characteristics, we want to tempt everything. On the other hand, we also escape from the situation if it is too bad for us. Nowadays, everyone chases after good material life but we come to ignore our spiritual life. Sometimes, we even unaware that why we do. Good or bad is not considered by others, life, is easy for you despite people will not agree with you. The last but not the least is to keep going with your decisions and goals.

    2007-02-27 12:30:25 補充:

    可以啊!我加你..

    參考資料: 加油...
  • Hi^_^~
    Lv 4
    1 0 年前

    對於湯姆歷險記蠻有興趣的,所以也來閱讀你的心得。你的內容很充實,也讓我有些收穫,但是,關於英文方面,有些許個人小小的建議,整篇看來還不錯,就是標點符號的用法,讓整篇看起來很不對勁,標點符號應該要緊鄰字母,之後,才空一格,不論是comma(,) 或是 period (.)。

    另外一點感覺就是你的文章感覺是先把中文寫好才翻成英文,但是,英文邏輯架構和中文是有相當落差,所以,感覺你的內容充實,但是閱讀起來就是有種不流暢的感覺。以下是我做的一點修改,讓您參考看看。

    The Adventures Of Tom Sawyer

    By Mark Twain, Adapted By Monica Kulling

    Protagonist:

    Tom Sawyer - He is an orphan. His major support is from his aunt, Polly.

    Other major Characters:

    Huckleberry Finn - He is Tom's best friend. His father always drinks a lot. He does not have to go to school.

    Becky Thatcher - She is a ver special friend of Tom.

    Theme: The author uses an acidulous tone to emphasize the contrast between Tom and the villagers.

    Main Conflict: The main point of the story is a about a murder which Tom and Huck witness at midnight.

    Genre : Caricature

    Point Of View : Third Person

    Thoughts of the story:

    Every character in the story symbolizes a certain of kind of attitude towards society. Even though Tom is a mischievous boy at school, I want to be in possession of his youthful innocence and adventurous spirit. From the event of the murder, we realize that there is so much injustice within a society. Unfortunately, we are always afraid to get into trouble so that we act like what Tom and Huck did before they found themselves, no longer living under a lot of pressure. Maybe we need more courage than others because we might influence people by what we do.

    Tom and Huck seem to stand for such outstanding characteristics. Life is full of contradictions. We want to explore everything. On the other hand, we also escape from the situation if it is too bad for us. Nowadays, everyone chases after a good material life. We come to ignore our spiritual part. Sometimes, we are even unaware of what we are doing. Good or bad differs from person to person. Life is easy for us but not for others. Last but not the least, we need to keep going on making our decisions and attaining our goals.

    2007-02-22 13:50:46 補充:

    Becky Thatcher - She is a very special friend of Tom. (正)

    Becky Thatcher - She is a ver special friend of Tom. (誤)

    2007-02-22 18:35:10 補充:

    高二的程度像你這樣是非常不錯的,很不好意思,誤會你是先寫作中文稿,我想你這樣做法,已經非常正確了,你只要勤加練習,我想你英文應該可以慢慢脫離中文的影響,寫出很好的英文文章。另,我沒有使用MSN的習慣,真不好意思。

    2007-02-28 15:19:57 補充:

    I got it! I replied too. Thanks for your kind invitation.

還有問題?馬上發問,尋求解答。