翔翔 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

檢查英文文章對錯(抱歉沒點了但還是幫我吧)

幫我看那一篇寫對,順便修改

中文(第2篇有修改中文):想要當一個理想的學生,我們就要專心於課業上,從學習中增加我們的知識,從生活中獲取經驗,友愛同學,尊重師長,服從學校規則。

最重要的是,訂定自己的目標,努力朝自己的方向前進,不能輕言放棄 , 雖然是艱辛的,但未來將會嚐到甜美的果實 , 這就是一名理想的學生。

(1)To be an ideal student, we must pay attention in class, increase our knowledge through studying, lean experiences from daily life, be friendly with classmates, respect teachers, and obey school’s regulations. Moreover, the most important thing is set a goal, work hard toward the goal and not giving up. Even though it is difficult to achieve, the result will be sweet. This is what I think a ideal student.

(2)To be an ideal student, we should focus on schoolwork. Increase our knowledge though learning, gaining experience through living. An ideal student will also be friendly with fellow classmates, paying respect to teachers and complying with the rules and regulations setforth by the school.Most importantly, we should set our goals and and move towards them with unshakeable resolution. Even though the process will be difficult and arduous, but we shall taste the sweetness of success in the future.

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這樣ㄉ文章程度在哪ㄍ階段,國中還是高中...等

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  • Hi^_^~
    Lv 4
    1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    純粹是個人的感覺,您的第二篇在用字的方面都較第一篇好。我不太會改人家的文章,第一篇架構比較簡單,外國人似乎不太愛句子太複雜,所以就依照您的中文,在第一篇作了一些結構和用字上做些許修改,你的英文字用得不錯,都很正確,所以,我更換的只是讓你參考看看。

    To be an ideal student, we must pay attention to our study. We have to increase our knowledge through the process of learning and gain valuable experiences from our daily life. It is also indispensable to be friendly with classmates, to respect teachers and the elders, and to obey the conduct codes of our school. Moreover, the most important thing is to set a goal and make every effort to attain it without giving up any chance. Even though it is difficult to achieve it, the outcome will be fruitful in the coming future. This is what I think an ideal student is.

    2007-02-21 19:35:29 補充:

    Thanks for your kind words!

    2007-02-22 14:57:28 補充:

    我想應該算是國高中程度吧,因為沒有用什麼深的辭彙和句型。

  • 1 0 年前

    這樣ㄉ文章程度在哪ㄍ階段,國中還是高中...等

  • ~Ãú~
    Lv 5
    1 0 年前

    Xerxess 說的蠻不錯的, 他修改後的比上面兩篇還要正確一點

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