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幫我修改這篇英文心得....修改的部分請駐名一下了

幫我修改這篇文章了~ 拜託

this is a simple story, but the story show the how it is like in the real world, where you could change overtime. The cheese in the story, may be something we want, maybe it's a job, a communication, money, or health, etc. The "cheese" everybody want might be different. To a poor kid, he might want a toy or a shirt. For a economist, it might wealth. Or, for a patient, it could simply be just a healthy body. But different in time, everybody would want different kind of "cheese" at the different time of their life. But the most important thing is, do you want to get the "cheese"? When you get it, do you appreciate it?

This book teach us a important lesson. It could be use on jobs and life, so you could know how to deal with challenges. Except for the cheese, another important things is the change. Sometimes, you need to change your personality, your life, and the things you have, in order to reach your new goals. Sometimes, you need to lose something, in order to get something new. You need to change according to the real world.

This book teach you that how do you get the "cheese", you need to change in order to continue live on the changing world. You need to change to deal with hardships. Some ideas of life, you could find it in this world. The lesson the book is teaching you, can help you deal with challeges, and solve the problems you have, and know what you actually want. And isn't that what we have been looking for, and what do you think?

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  • 1 0 年前
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    This is a simple story, but the story shows how it is like in the real world, where you could change overtime. The cheese in the story, may be something we want, maybe it's a job, a communication, money, or health, etc. The "cheese" everybody wants might be different. To a poor kid, he might want a toy or a shirt. For a economist, it might be wealth. Or, for a patient, it could simply be just a healthy body. But different in time, everybody would want different kinds of "cheese"; at different time of their life. But the most important thing is that do you want to get the "cheese"? When you get it, do you appreciate it?

    This book teaches us an important lesson. It could be useful on jobs and life, so you could know how to deal with challenges. Except for the cheese, another important thing is the change. Sometimes, you need to change your personality, your life, and the things you have, in order to reach your new goals. Sometimes, you need to lose something, in order to get something new. You need to change according to the real world.

    This book teaches you that how  you get the "cheese", you need to change in order to continue to live in the changing world. You need to change to deal with hardships. , you could find some ideas of life in this world. The lesson, in which  the book is teaching you, can help you deal with challeges, and solve the problems you have, and let you know what you actually want. And isn't that what we have been looking for, and what you have been thinking?

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  • 1 0 年前

    This is a simple story but the story shows what the real world is like where you could change over time. The cheese in the story could be something that we want. Perhaps it’s a job, a communication, money, or health etc. The “cheese” that everybody wants may be different depending on the person. To a poor child it could be a toy or a shirt, for an economist it might wealth, or for a patient it could simply be a healthy body. But everybody would want a different kind of “cheese” at different points in their life. However the most important thing to consider is do you want to get the “cheese”? When you get it, will you appreciate it?

     

    This book teaches us an important lesson. It could be used at work and in you personal life in order to learn how to deal with challenges. As well as the cheese, another important thing is change. Sometimes you need to change your personality, your life, and the things you have in order to reach your new goals. Sometimes, you need to lose something in order to get something new. You need to change according to the real world.

     

    This book can teach you how to get the “cheese”. You need to change in order to continue to live in the changing world. You need to change in order to deal with hardships. Some ideas of life, you could find it in this world. The lessons that the book teaches you can help you to deal with challenges, solve the problems you have and know what you actually want. And isn’t that what we have been looking for, and what do you think?

     

    Some ideas of life, you could find it in this world: Makes no sense so cannot be corrected.

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