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1起飛時間 2機長 3人妖 4香蕉船 5拖曳傘 6導遊(或領隊)

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Love Thailand forever

Last Tuesday,my family and I went to Thailand.

I really enjoyed there during six days.

I got up at 4;00 a.m.,and got to airport.

The 1起飛時間 was delay for two hours.

2機長 completed the flight in 3 hours and 50 minutes.

Got off the plane,we went to the DREAM WORLD that was a amusement park.

It was fun that we took many pictures with dummy.

I also went to the artificial SNOW TOWN.

There were many cute animals,like penguins and polar bears.

Then,we watch the 3人妖 show,it was very special and curious.

I can't believe that their face were such beautiful.

I visited many popular high spot,too.

In 東芭樂園,I sat on an elephant's back,and to go round the stadium.

It was very exciting in 東芭樂園

One day,we arrived PATAYA and took the speedboat to an island.

I played wet bike,4香蕉船 and 5拖曳傘.I never played these before.

The 6導遊(或領隊) told to me Thailand's sea water is more saltiness than Taiwan's

And so on,presto,we should go home.

I sayGood bye to the Thailand, I love Thailand forever.

By the way, hopes Thailand always beautiful.

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    1起飛時間 2機長 3人妖 4香蕉船 5拖曳傘 6導遊(或領隊)

    1. Departure time

    2. Captain

    3. Shemale

    4. Banana boat

    5. Parasail

    6. Tour guide

    Love Thailand forever (欠主辭)

    Last Tuesday, (空格) my family (用複數) and I went to Thailand.

    I really enjoyed there during six days. (用the six day trip比較好)

    I got up at 4;00(用冒號) a.m.,and got to airport.

    The 1起飛時間 was delay for two hours.

    2機長 completed the flight in 3 hours and 50 minutes.

    Got off the plane, (空格) we went to the DREAM WORLD (只有第一個字母大寫) that (用where) was a amusement park.

    It was fun that we took many pictures with dummy. (Dummy用起來很怪, 像在說笨蛋)

    I also went to the artificial SNOW TOWN(只有第一個字母大寫).

    There were many cute animals,(空格)like penguins and polar bears. (逗號以後獨立寫一句比較好)

    Then,(空格)we watch(過去式) the 3人妖 show,(空格)it was very special and curious. (Curious是指好奇的, 應該換個字)

    I can't believe that their face(複數) were such beautiful.

    I visited many popular high spot,(空格)too. (用hot spots)

    In 東芭樂園,(空格)I sat on an elephant's back,(空格)and to go(用過去式) round (用around) the stadium.

    It was very exciting in 東芭樂園 (用it很含糊)

    One day,(空格)we arrived PATAYA(只有第一個字母大寫) and took the speedboat to an island.

    I played (用rode) wet bike,(空格)4香蕉船 and 5拖曳傘.(空格)I never played(用tried比較好) these before.

    The 6導遊(或領隊) told to me Thailand's sea water is more saltiness (用adj.) than Taiwan's

    And so on,presto,we should go home. (請重寫)

    I say(用過去式)Good(小寫) bye to the(不用the) Thailand, (分開一句)I love Thailand forever.

    By the way, hopes Thailand (欠動辭) always beautiful. (BTW是很隨便而且很不正式的用法, 這樣寫聽起來像是無所謂的樣子, 請改進)

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