力瑩 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

難忘經驗的英文文章-英文高手幫我訂正一下文法~急~贈20點

1.這是我特別的經驗,在去年的11月我接受盲腸手術的期間,醫生叫我不能下床,必須在床上待命幾天, 當時我因為窮,只能選擇普通病房,普通病房連電視機及廣播都沒有,讓我快要無聊死了,而且我的右手又打著點滴,只好靠著手機的遊戲來打發時間

Below is my special experience.During I was operated " Laparoscopic Operation” a few month ago, the doctor told me that I need to stay in bed and for a few days.Because I have no money , I must chose to live in bad hospital room.It is no television. broadcast it make me boring.

2.在那個同時,我的同事也剛好接受痔瘡手術,他的病房在我病房的對面,他也不能下床, 情形跟我很類似,只好靠著手機閱讀小說及看電影,並且還幫我拍了一張在病床上的相片留做紀念,我想要不是有手機這種照像的功能,能會帶手機去醫院呢?

My right hand had an Intravenous injection,I use my left hand to play mobile games and had a good time.In the same time,my colleague was operated “Hemorrhoid Operation”lived in the room which is opposite my.Not only he use the cell phone read novel.saw movie and listened music but also he took a picture for me in order to memory in hospital.I think that nobody carries a camera to go to hospital.

However, in recent years, more and more problems are happening because of cell phones.

請大大們能幫我修正一下文法,我並非用翻譯軟體用的~真的想精進自己的語文能力,麻煩大家囉~

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  • 1 0 年前
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    The story I am telling is my special experience in hospital. I had Laparoscopic Operation in November last year. Dr. told me to stay on the bed all the time while I am hospitalised. I do not have money that time. So, I only can chose to stay in ordinary ward. There is no television or radio provided and I had an injection of intravenous drip on my right hand side, those things drove me crazy. So, I only can use my the other hand to paly game on my mobile phone to kill the time.

    My colleague had Hemorrhoid Operation during the period and his ward was just oppsite to mine. We had a very similar situation that neither of us allowed to get out of bed. The only thing we can do is to read noval and watch movie from the mobile phone. He took a picture of me being sick on the bed to remember this experience. I do not think anyone will take mobile phone to the hospital unless it has the photo taking fuction.

    參考資料: Myself
  • 1 0 年前

    The following story is my special experience in hospital. I had Laparoscopic surgery in November last year. The doctor told me to stay in bed for a few days while I was hospitalised. I didn't have money then(當時). So, I could only choose to stay in an ordinary ward(普通病房). There was no television or radio(廣播) provided and I was hooked up to an intravenous drip on my right hand. It drove me crazy. So I could only use my left hand to play games on my mobile phone to kill time.

    At the same time(表時間要用at), my colleague had a hemorrhoid operation and his ward was just opposite mine. We had a very similar situation - neither of us was allowed to get out of bed. The only thing we could do was to read a novel and watch movies(看電影要用watch) from our mobile phones. He took a picture of me being sick on the bed so we wouldn't forget this experience. I don't think anyone would take a mobile phone to hospital unless it has a built-in camera.

    在講述故事或是經驗的時候,表示這件事已經發生,所以要用"過去式",注意你在敘述的過程中時態要一致。

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