Fay 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

有請英文高手幫我改英文日記~^^

我想把英文學好,最近開始寫英文日記,但...我想寫了還是要知道哪裡有錯才會有進步吧~so請各位高手幫我訂正一下,看看我哪裡有錯須改的,因為是累積十天的份量,so有點多,不好意思,請你們儘量囉~如果可以的話,請告訴我錯在哪~還有為什麼要降改,如果不方便也沒關係,謝謝囉~

The mosquitoes

I hate the mosquitoes.

It is racketing around in my room last night.

I tried to kill the mosquitoes buzzing.

But it had a narrow squeak.

I suffered from a sleepy today.

New Year's Eve

Today is Chinese New Year's Eve.

All family has a yearly reunion dinner.

I was cleaned my room in the morning.

Although my room is small, I have many things to clean up.

So I spent lots of time to clean up.

Go to the KTV

KTV provide an amusement place.

My friend and I go to the KTV at midnight.

We spent five hours to sing songs.

Somebody were high on booze.

Everybody have a happy night.

Like a pig

New year is my sleep day.

I sleep everyday

I eat and drink to my heart's content.

I think I become a pig.

So I begin to lose my weight.

Friendship

Everyone need friendship.

Regardless of men or women, it is very important.

I am possessed of many good friends.

So I treasure our friendship.

I hope that we will be good.

No idea

I don't have any idea to keep my diary everyday.

I have a trouble.

I have achoke point.

I don't have any idea.

Oh~my God~Give me a opinion...

Depravity

Human being have a common failing, it is depravity.

The holidays corrupted me completely.

The backsliding will make you fail.

I abandon my lazy life.

I decided to make effort for my life.

P.S After four days.Hahaha...

Maintains my car

I maintain my car today.

I spent over four thousands dollars to maintain it.

I expended large sums of money in maintaining this car.

So I am a pauper.

Because the car.

A new hairdo

I have a new hairdo today.

I went to a beauty salon for a permanent.

I wore my hair in a fringe.

My hair is different past of style.

I like it.

The travel

I want to travel by myself.

I have so many places to go not yet.

It is exhilarating to travel,

and widen my eyeshot.

I hope that I will have a travel this year.

已更新項目:

'=' ('貼上來都變'=,So我註明一下)

以下是有疑問的,我把我中文貼上來,其實大部份都是我從字典的例句上寫的,so會有點怪怪的吧~

I suffered from a sleepy today.=我今天受失眠之苦

I eat and drink to my heart;s content.=我盡情地吃喝

backsliding =墮落

I went to a beauty salon for a permanent.我到美容院去燙了髮

I wore my hair in a fringe.我剪了瀏海

2 個已更新項目:

對了~我不小心又貼了一篇重覆的,

so也幫我回答一下吧~

因為都是一樣的= ='

http://tw.knowledge.yahoo.com/question/question?qi...

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  • 1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    參考看看吧~~

    The mosquitoes

    I hate mosquitoes.

    It was racketing around in my room last night.

    I tried to kill the mosquitoes buzzing.

    But it had a narrow squeak.

    I suffered from a sleepy today. 不懂@@”可以說一下中文嗎?

    New Year’s Eve

    Today is Chinese New Year’s Eve.

    All my family has a reunion dinner yearly.

    I cleaned my room in the morning.

    Although my room is small, I have many things to clean up.

    So I spent lots of time to clean.

    Go to the KTV

    KTV provides an amusement place.

    My friend and I went to the KTV at midnight.

    We spent five hours to sing songs.

    Somebody was high on the booze.

    Everybody had a happy night.

    Like a pig

    New year is my sleeping day.

    I sleep everyday

    I eat and drink to my heart's content.看不懂= =?

    I think I will become a pig.

    So I begin to lose my weight.

    Friendship

    Everyone needs friendship.

    Regardless of men or women, it is very important.

    I am possessed of many good friends.

    So I treasure our friendship.

    I hope that we keep it forever.

    No idea

    I don’t have any idea to write my diary everyday.

    I have a trouble.

    There is something stuck in my mind.我想不出要寫什麼

    I don’t have any idea.

    Oh~My God~

    Give me something ...

    Depravity

    Human beings have a common failing, it is depravity.

    The holidays were corrupted me completely.

    The backsliding 這是啥字@@? will make you fail.

    I abandon my lazy life.

    I decided to make more efforts for my life.

    P.S After four days. Hahaha...

    Maintains my car

    I maintained my car today.

    I spent over four thousands dollars to maintain it.

    I expended large sums of money in maintaining this car.

    So I am a pauper.

    Because the car.

    A new hairdo

    I had a new hairdo today.

    I went to a beauty salon for a 這各自不適用在頭髮上喔@@ permanent.

    I wore帶假髮嗎? my hair in a fringe.

    My hair is different past of style.

    I like it.

    The travel

    I want to travel by myself.

    I have so many places not yet to go.

    It is exhilarating to travel,

    and widen my eyeshot.

    I hope that I will have a travel this year.

    參考資料: 我自己
  • 6 年前

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  • 匿名使用者
    7 年前

    我一直都有過敏狀況,是最近才知道要用防螨寢具的,因為醫師建議我用,我也考慮了很久,想說要買就買最好的,上個月趁網站有折扣的時候買了一組【北之特】防蹣(螨)寢具來用用看,真沒想到~~現在覺得過敏狀況有改善多了。雖然比一般的貴一些,不過~真值得!

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