發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

請各位 英文 高手 幫我看一下 這篇英作 有哪裡錯勒..?

Last Sunday, Ta-hua and A-ya were went to see a romantic movie.A-ya was look forward to it. So she went to movie house delighted. One hour later.Ta-hua still didn’t come. It made A-ya angry.

When A-ya consider she will go home or not. The phone rang. A-ya said, “I am in the hospital because I was bumped by a car. When A-ya heard the direful news. She was very worry about Ta-hua, so A-ya quickly run to the hospital.

In the hospital. Ta-hua said, “I am so sorry. If I fine .I will accepted take you to see movie.” A-ya said, “Ok so you will take care of you.”

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  • 1 0 年前
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    這是我幫你稍為作的修改~~~看看吧

    Last Sunday, Ta-hua and A-ya were went to see a romantic movie. A-ya was look forward it. So she went to a movie theater delighted. One hour later. Ta-hua still didn’t come. It was made A-ya angry.

    When A-ya considered she will go home or not. The phone rang. A-ya said, I am in the hospital because I was bumped by a car. When A-ya heard the horrible news. She was very worry about Ta-hua, so A-ya ran quickly to the hospital.

    In the hospital, Ta-hua said, I am so sorry. If I was cover, I will treat you to see a movie. A-ya said, ok but now you should take care of yourself.

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  • 1 0 年前

    went to ===>want 想要,要

    看完以後寫的都對,就是說上星期日男女朋友相約要去看電影

    結果女生等不到男生等了一小時以為男生爽約 而且等太久肚子也餓了

    女生正在考慮是否要回家還是不要時,男生打電話來說出車禍在醫院,女朋友很擔心快速趕到醫院

    男朋友很抱歉說若不是他出車禍就可以赴約去看電影了

    女朋友卻溫柔的說沒關係我只想關心你

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