Fay 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

有請英文高手幫我改英文日記~^^

因為我想學好英文,so我打算寫英文日記,來訓練自己,

但我想還是需要老師來指導我哪裡文法錯了,

so我每天都會po上來,請各位高手幫我訂正吧~

p.s希望能將訂正過的地方註明為啥要降改,感激不盡喲~^^

A boring day

I am boring today.

I had nothing to do in my office hours.

I felt that days wear on like years.

Though I am relaxed, I don;t like so.

I hope that I have helpful for my job.

已更新項目:

>>>這句是說度日如年嗎?

>>>I feel that day seems like a year.

Yes~妳寫的好詳細唷~讚!!!

可以順便幫我訂正之前的嗎?

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  • 1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    有自己感覺的話要改成bored,

    I am bored today.

    had是過去式,用have就可以了,

    I have nothing to do in my office hours.

    felt是過去式,用feel即可,

    這句是說度日如年嗎?

    I feel that day seems like a year.

    though很像都是放在中間的,放句首用although或even though,

    Although I am relaxed, I don't like it.

    這句是我自己改的,改成我希望我的工作需要我..

    I hope that my job needs me.

    提供你做參考囉~^^

    2007-02-28 02:28:45 補充:

    亂碼是:do not 的那一撇..

    2007-03-01 00:41:21 補充:

    喔~如果是晚上寫ㄉ話的確是要用過去式,

    抱歉,沒注意到..

    如果要訂正日記或許可以給即時通比較快囉~

    不過如果要賺點數ㄉ話就另當別論ㄌ..^^

    參考資料: 自己
  • 1 0 年前

    對了~忘了說~日記不是都用過去式嗎?

    因為寫的時候是晚上,那今天不是都過掉了嗎?

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