宅男な逆襲 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

校正沒有ethylene treatments的內文

請幫我校正奇怪的地方?

大概的意思 .就可以了

The relative fresh weight of all non-ethylene-treated flowers

declined steadily, 沒有經過乙烯處理的花 平穩的減少鮮重.

and noticeable differences only became apparent

after 6 days (Fig. 3A). 外觀在第6天後有明顯差別.

At this time, STS-treated flowers maintained a higher relative fresh weight.STS處理過的花保持最高的鮮重.

Ethylene treatment changed the pattern of relative fresh weight loss,

乙烯處理導致花 的鮮重 喪失.

such that the loss was much reduced by STS pre-treatment, and reduced by 1-MCP (Fig. 3B).不懂他整句的意思?

All flowers absorbed more solution than they lost over the first 3

days (Fig. 3C, D).

所有的花吸收 瓶溶液在第3天最多.

lost 在這裡是什麼意思?

In the absence of applied ethylene (Fig. 3C),

缺乏應用乙烯?

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  • 匿名使用者
    1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    The relative fresh weight of all non-ethylene-treated flowers declined steadily

    沒有經過乙烯處理的花相對鮮重持續的遞減

    and noticeable differences only became apparent after 6 days (Fig. 3A).

    觀察到的差異在第6天後才顯得醒目

    At this time, STS-treated flowers maintained a higher relative fresh weight.

    同時﹐STS處理過的花維持較高的相對鮮重

    Ethylene treatment changed the pattern of relative fresh weight loss

    乙烯處理打亂了相對鮮重喪失的機制

    such that the loss was much reduced by STS pre-treatment, and reduced by 1-MCP (Fig. 3B)

    就是由於STS處理而大大地減少了失重現象﹐1-MCP處理也有減緩失重現象的效果 (但是沒有造成像STS處理那麼明顯的效果)。

    All flowers absorbed more solution than they lost over the first 3 days (Fig. 3C, D).

    在前三天裡﹐所有的花吸收溶液的量比因為蒸散作用喪失的多

    In the absence of applied ethylene (Fig. 3C)

    沒有施用乙烯

    2007-02-28 18:48:17 補充:

    fresh weight 鮮重(也有說濕重的)﹐生物在正常情況下的重量,即生物保留體內水分的重量(the weight of an organism with body water retained) 。相對的於鮮重﹐測量不含水份的生物體重量的是乾重dry weight。

    2007-02-28 18:48:50 補充:

    這個實驗程序是先在採收時(第零日)稱取花莖的重量﹐接著在隨後的1﹐3﹐5﹐7天稱取花莖的重量﹐然後計算相對鮮重(百分)比﹕RFW(%)=(Wt/Wt=0)x100﹐相對鮮重比也就是採收後的重量和採收時的重量的相對百分比。

    2007-02-28 18:49:08 補充:

    換句話說﹐如果完全保持鮮重﹐相對鮮重比就是一百﹐如果失去的水份和其它成份越多﹐這個相對鮮重比就越低。

    2007-03-01 16:12:40 補充:

    這篇論文的樣品數小﹐變異性高﹐雖然可以看出保鮮處理的效果﹐可是從科學的角度來看﹐它的結果說明和討論的部份並不嚴謹。

    比如說在敘述實驗結果時﹐All flowers absorbed more solution than they lost over the first 3 days (Fig. 3C, D)﹐是介紹圖表3C和3D的觀察結果﹐應該說﹕有沒有乙烯處理﹐溶液吸收力都顯示在前三天上昇﹐三天以後都下降的現象。

    然後是這個天上掉下來的“they lost”﹐原來就沒有界定﹐後面也沒有後續﹐是一個敗筆。

    2007-03-01 16:13:28 補充:

    再舉一個例子﹐這句﹕solution uptake declined rapidly after day 3 in all

    pre-treated flowers except in those pre-treated with STS。科學報告不是文

    學作品﹐這裡的 rapidly 也是不必要的﹐從圖表的結果來看﹐所有的樣品的溶液吸收力在三天以後都減少﹐

    可是“急遽”就很不科學﹐倒是急遽的降低了這篇論文的說服力。

    參考資料: http://www.horticultureworld.net/Ethylene%20and%20... wain翻譯的很好﹐我就隨便說說, 當然還是有參考價值
  • 1 0 年前

    fresh weight... 翻為溼重好, 還是鮮花重好

    In the absence of applied ethylene 缺乏乙烯處理

    2007-02-28 17:51:32 補充:

    兩位 翻譯功力不錯

  • wain
    Lv 7
    1 0 年前

    The relative fresh weight of all non-ethylene-treated flowers declined steadily, and noticeable differences only became apparent after 6 days (Fig. 3A ). At this time, STS-treated flowers maintained a higher relative fresh weight. 

    所有未經浸泡乙烯溶液的鮮花,「鮮花重量」都持續的減少,彼此之間的差異一直到第六天才比較明顯,在這個時點上,浸泡在STS溶液的鮮花保持較高的「鮮花重量」。(請參看圖表3A)

    Ethylene treatment changed the pattern of relative fresh weight loss, such that the loss was much reduced by STS pre-treatment, and reduced by 1-MCP (Fig. 3B). 

    把鮮花浸泡在乙烯溶液就會改變這個「鮮花重量減少」的模式,預先浸泡過STS溶液的鮮花,「鮮花重量」的減少,不像預先浸泡過1-MCP 溶液的鮮花那麼嚴重。(請參看圖表3B) 

    All flowers absorbed more solution than they lost over the first 3 days (Fig. 3C , D). 

    在前三天,所有的鮮花吸收的溶液都比流失的多。(請參看圖表3D) 

    In the absence of applied ethylene, solution uptake declined rapidly after day 3 in all pre-treated with STS. (Fig. 3C )

    在沒有使用乙烯的情形下,則所有預先浸泡過STS 溶液的鮮花,吸收溶液的力量都急遽減少。(請參看圖表3C)

    註釋: 

    所有圖表請參看下列網頁的第六頁:http://www.horticultureworld.net/Ethylene and anti-ethylene treatment effects on cut.pdf

     

    2007-03-01 10:54:03 補充:

    In the absence of applied ethylene, solution uptake declined rapidly after day 3 in all pre-treated with STS. (Fig. 3C )

    2007-03-01 10:54:50 補充:

    原文如下:

    In the absence of applied ethylene (Fig. 3C), solution uptake declined rapidly after day 3 in all pre-treated flowers except in those pre-treated with STS.

    2007-03-01 10:55:28 補充:

    所以應該翻譯為「在沒有使用乙烯的情形下,則除了預先浸泡過STS 溶液的鮮花以外,其他預先處理過的鮮花的溶液吸收力在三天以後都急遽減少。(請參看圖表3C)」

    參考資料: 我的理解
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