小柒 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

請幫我修改英文作文!!

請幫我修改英文作文

第一 : Tom invite the Petter play basketball together, inviting other classmates conveniently to see in basketball field, they play of very happy, play to in the evening, Tom says next must invite again to play together.

第二 : The little boy plays to have to play to 11:00 and is called down by the mother, going to an on alternate days 7:00 A.M., the little boy just prepares to go to school, arrived late as a result, and then is scolded by the teacher, the little boy decides hereafter want to keep early hour.

我要正確的文法,不要用網路翻譯!!

謝謝各位大大~~

2 個解答

評分
  • Tony
    Lv 5
    1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    好中文的句子阿... 妳都照著中文想的逐字去翻的吧... 改這種文章特別痛苦說

    唉... 雖然不清楚你的英文程度到哪裡,但寫出這種句子來,你要加油了!我一句一句幫你改,順便講解,希望你下次不要再寫出這種句子。

    Tom invited Peter to play basketball together, and asked other classmates to watch the game.

    一般而言,我們習慣敘述一件事會用過去式,因此你的invite要變成過去式;如果真的一定要用現在式,invite也應該加s,因為主詞Tom是第三人稱單數。

    第二的問題是,人名前絕對不會加the;誰就是誰,沒有用定冠詞指定的必要。另外就是...那應該是Peter吧!Petter感覺怪怪的說...

    接著是invite和ask這兩個字的用法。invite/ask sb. to V... 邀請某人去做某事,寫句子前要先把字的用法搞清楚再寫。

    接著是後面那個句子的問題,前面已經出現一次invite,盡量不要再出現一樣的字,翻一下字典找同意字替換會比較好;我幫你換成ask,一樣記得用過去式。當然,如果你要用分詞構句寫也OK,但是依你寫出來的這幾個句子來看,我覺得你還是用簡單的and連接就好。句子寫到這裡就該結束了,沒有人寫英文句子用逗點一直接的!

    They had a good time and played until evening.

    這句我直接幫你重寫了!「玩得很高興」,請用 have a good time 這個片語;這個片語非常常見,也很常用,所以把他記起來。玩到很晚... 用until來寫就好,還有evening前面也沒有加the的必要,注意一下。

    Tom promised to play together next time.

    這具一樣,幾乎全都重寫過一次。中文裡面雖然是用「Tom說下次再一起打球」的用法,但是從英文裡面去看,這個「說」的意思偏向「承諾、允諾」,因此我們要用promise。後面沒什麼很困難的東西,你自己應該看得懂。

    至於第二個,歹勢...這篇Chinese-English的程度已經超越我能理解的範圍。我看很久也猜了很久還是搞不清楚你到底想說什麼... 也許你直接給我中文我幫你寫還比較快!(看的頭很痛...)

    參考資料: myself
  • 1 0 年前

    第一 : Tom inviteS Petter TO play basketball, HE HAD ALSO invitED ANother classmates to MEET THEM AT basketball field. they HAD AGREAT TIME PLAYING BASKETBALL, THEY'VE playED TILL LATE AT NIGHT. Tom says WE must invite OTHERS TO again to play together.

    第二 : The little boy plays to have to play to 11:00 and is called down by the mother, going to an on alternate days 7:00 A.M., the little boy just prepares to go to school, arrived late as a result, and then is scolded by the teacher, the little boy decides hereafter want to keep early hour. 看不太懂

    THE LITTLE BOY HAD PLAYED TILL 11PM. THE NEXT MORNING HER MOTHER HAD WOKE HIM UP AT 7AM, SO HE WILL BE READY ON TIME FOR SCHOOL. AS RESULT, THE BOY HAD ARRIVED LATE, AND HIS TEACHER HAD SCOLDED HIM. SO FROM THEN, THE BOY HAD DECIDED THAT WILL GO TO BED EARLIER.

    因不是很確定你的意思 我就加加減減幫你翻了以上

    參考資料: 英文系畢業
還有問題?馬上發問,尋求解答。