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請英文高手check一下我的文章。

<Teacher>, is my French teacher, she is a kind and idiosyncratic madam, she always patient to respond every student’s questions however she is busy or not. She has a short and straight hair, and always dressed in classical and becoming on class. I consider she is responsible and conscientious teacher after last semester.

French is a difficult class to me, I have to spent a lot of time to review my notes of French, and I often found some problems every time, so I must to ask her in French class, and she always answer me with smile. But despite of that, there are few flippant students always like to chat during the class, anyway, I am still like to attend her class.

After a semester, I like <school> more, and I thought all of teachers are as kind as her in <school>, so I think that will pleasure me to study in next three and half years.

PS: 這是我要交的作業,<xxx>不方便公開,另如有更好的idea也請不吝告知,感謝!

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哇,大家都回答的好棒,羞愧中......

不過想再請教一下..關於水音小姐所提idiosyncratic這個詞並不適用,

那如果我想表達出『平易近人的』或『溫柔的』...該用哪些形容詞

較為適當呢?再麻煩各位了,感激!!

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  • 1 0 年前
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    <Teacher>, is my French teacher, she is a kind and idiosyncratic madam 這一段可以寫成<Teacher> is my French teacher WHO is a kind and idiosyncratic madam 然後因為還沒有講完這位老師,想要接著下去,所以這裡可以加一個分號 ; 再接著講她是如何的有耐心。

    she always patient to respond every student’s questions 這裡你用的耐心是形容詞,所以前面一定要有個be動詞 she IS always patient to respond (or answer) every student’s questions 括弧裡的是另一個用法,可以參考看看。接著 however she is busy or not. 這裡however = but = 但是,所以這裡不能用 however, 應該要用whether ,整句就是 She is always patient to respond (or answer) every student’s questions whether she is busy or not. 不管她是否忙碌,她都會很有耐心的回答每個學生的問題。

    She has a short and straight hair, and always dressed in classical and becoming on class. 從逗點之後,因為你說 always,所以dress必須使用現在式,因為是(總是)的事情,所以要以現在式來敘述;and的後面我有點不懂,你是指穿著正統地來課堂上嗎?那可以說 and always dresses classically to class就可以囉!

    I consider she is responsible and conscientious teacher after last semester. 這裡有點怪怪的,為什麼在上一個學期後你會認為她是一個有責任感和認真的老師呢?也許可以加點說明,例如 After I took her class last semester, I consider that she is A responsible and conscientious teacher. 別忘了要加冠詞 a。

    French is a difficult class to me, I have to spent a lot of time to review my notes of French, and I often found some problems every time, so I must to ask her in French class, and she always answer me with smile. But despite of that, there are few flippant students always like to chat during the class, anyway, I am still like to attend her class. (以上是你的原文)

    French是法語、法國人,或是法國的的意思,若你要形容成一門課的話,後面要加上class比較好,像是French CLASS is a CHALLENGE FOR me. I have to spent a lot of time to review my notes from class and I often find some problems (已經使用often了,所以every time可以省略), therefore, I must (不要加to) ask (my teacher) (or 老師的名字,不要只說her,因為這一段完全沒有提過你的老師是哪位) in French class, and she always answerS me with her smile EVEN there are A few flippant students who always chat in class. Anyway, I likt to attend her class. (or I like to join her class.) 括弧裡是另一種說法可以參考看看。 此外,like是動詞,所以前面不能再用be動詞了唷!

    2007-03-03 14:22:28 補充:

    After a semester (or After one semester),

    2007-03-03 14:23:02 補充:

    I like to go to school more and more, and I think all MY teachers are as kind as (老師的名字,不要只說her) in <school>. THEREFORE, I think this will GIVE ME LOTS OF ENCOURAGEMENT to study in the FOLLOWING three and half years.

    2007-03-03 14:23:40 補充:

    括弧裡的英文都是另一種說法,都可以參考看看。

    有什麼錯漏的我會再補上來或請指教~^__^~

    希望有幫助到你。

    2007-03-05 01:14:12 補充:

    平易近人或溫柔的其實可以用friendly或是sweet來形容。

    參考資料: myself, myself, myself, myself
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  • 1 0 年前

    括弧裡面是修改過的地方

    我把句子分開比較好閱讀

    XXOO [這裡不需要逗點] is my French teacher[.]

    She is a kind and [這裡您想說的應該是"氣質",但是idiosyncratic不適用,而英文似乎沒有可以很正確表達氣質的形容詞,所以... 建議您換個形容詞] [woman (madam通常用於不熟識的人)].

    She [is] always patient for responding every student's quiestions [weather] she is busy or not.

    She has [] short and straight hair, and she always dressed [classically to class].

    I consider [her as a] responsible and conscientious teacher after [taking her class for a semester].

    French is [] difficult [] [for] me.

    I have to [spend] a lot of time to review my notes [不用說French讀者就知道了], and I [always find] some [more] problems every time I go over it.

    [Thus], I [have to] ask her in [] class, and she always answer me with [a] smile.

    But despite of that, there are still a few [naughty] students [who are] always [chatting] in class.

    [However], I still like [] her class [very much].

    [I like OOXX better] after [this] semester because I [think (thought代表你現在已經不這麼想了)] all of [the] teachers in this school are as kind as her.

    [] I think [this] will [encourage] me to studay [harder] in [the] next three and [a] half years.

    如果有問題可以問我

    參考資料: 在美國讀書的自己 (西班牙文對我來說也很難...)
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  • 1 0 年前

    XXX, is my French teacher.*1 She is a kind and idiosyncratic madam. She is*2 always patient to respond every student's questions no matter how busy she is*3. She has short and straight hair*4, and is always dressed beatifully in class*5. I consider her (to be)*6 a*7 responsible and conscientious teacher.

    French is a difficult subject*8 to me. I have to spend a lot of time reviewing*9 my French notes*10, and I often find questions*11. I must ask her in class*12, and she always answers*13 me with smiles*14. But despite of that, some*15 flippant students always like to chat during the class.  Anyway, I still like to attend her class.

    After a semester, I like XXX more, and I think*16 all of teachers are as kind as she is*17 in <school>.  I think that it will be a pleasure for me to study*18 in the*19 next three and half years.

    *1. 斷句在寫作的時候也是很重要的,一個句子可以不要很長,可以表達出完整的意思就可以了.但要注意,一個句子只能有一個動詞.

    *2. 有耐性的(patient)是個形容詞,故必須要把beV拿出來,故這裡必須補上is.

    *3. 不管她是否忙碌,也就是不管她忙不忙,用no matter how busy she is就可以了.

    *4. hair為不可數名詞,故前方的不定冠詞a必須拿掉.

    *5. 這句話我不太清楚要表達的是什麼意思,不過可以改成"在課堂上,她都穿著都很美麗大方."

    *6. consider這個字的用法,後加受詞,然後加to be, 其中to be通常被省略.

    *7. 老師(teacher)是可數名詞,單數的話,前面必須加冠詞a.

    *8. 法文是一門困難的"課程",課程必須要以subject或course來表達,class是"課堂"的意思.

    *9. 花時間在做什麼事情上,用spend Ving句型,spend後面接的動詞不能用不定詞.spend用原型,是因為前面有個不定詞(have to),故要還原.

    *10. 法文筆記,用French notes就可以了.

    *11. question指的是不懂的問題,但problem指的是麻煩,故要用questions比較貼切.

    *12. must為助動詞,後面要放原型動詞.

    *13. 記得第三人稱單數後面的動詞要加s(or es, ies).

    *14. 英文中的微笑,卻是可數的.

    *15. 有些同學,這裡用some就可以了,用there are開頭的話,會再出現一組動詞,後面的喜歡又會有變化,故前面there are 捨掉,就可以了.

    *16. 用現在式即可.

    *17. as kind as是連接詞,可以連接兩個句子,故接she is.

    *18. 對我來說將會是喜悅,用此句型.

    *19. 未來的三年半,有限定的時間,故必須加定冠詞the.

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  • 1 0 年前

    XXX, is my French teacher, she is a kind and idiosyncratic madam. She is always patient to answer all the questions whether she is busy or not. She has a short and straight hair and dresses in a typical teacher style. I would consider her as a responsible and hardworking teacher.

    French is difficult for me. I have to spend a lot of time to review my notes and often encounter problems while I am at it. When I bring these questions to her, she always answer me with a smile. Despite the fact that there are a few students always like to chat during the class, I still like to attend her classes.

    After this semester, I like XXXX more than when I started. I feel that all the teachers are as kind as her in XXXX , so I know I will have a lot of fun during my studies here in the next three and a half years.

    參考資料: me
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  • 1 0 年前

    <Teacher>, my French teacher, is a kind and incredible person. She is always patient to answer every students' questions no matter she is busy or not. She has short and straight hair, and is always dressed as a typical teacher in class. I consider she responsible and conscientious since last semester.

    French is difficult to me. I have to spend a lot of time reviewing my notes and often find difficult problems. So I have to ask her in class, and she always answers me with a smile. However, there are few flippant students always like to chat in class. Nonetheless, I still like to attend her class.

    After one semester, I like <school> moreand more, and I think all the teachers are as kind as her in <school>, so I think that will be my pleasure to study for next three and half years.

    參考資料: meself
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